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SS: No Tomorrow
IP:
Way she wears her clothes, hugging the curves never fails
Her dimples, her slightly up turned nose and her cute pigtails Her hazel mirrors shone, she had me by the first glance Disaster was prone, but I had to take the worst chance She change my style, now I always ask for her opinion Similar to her smile, her profile’s ahead of the competition As we became more intimate, we shared many hidden facts My hands explored her summit, she helped with my climax The sins in my mind were regressing, recoiled like a spring My barrier was only paper thin, the secret labeled string We both graduated at the same time, but different grades Our purity is called a crime, only because she’s underage Our love is a frail state, opinions make me cold and hollow Why is she called jail bait, without her there is no tomorrow Every city that I mapped, I will never live down that label I have never kidnapped, but I have just robbed the cradle Masta C – Try Me Sureal – Drugs Token – Fictional Piece If Possibe Can I Get Feedback On: Flow, Imagry, Content, Structure, Vocab, Wordplay...Thank You Last edited by The Realist : 11-05-03 at 11:28 PM. |
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