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Old 11-12-03, 09:37 AM   #1
Smooth JT
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Why did you die?

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Why Did you die with a heart pure and strong,

With a fat six pack and fuel to push the max,

I notice going to school that you started acting up,

So I just kept driving and figured it was ok,

Went to the gas station and your heart started to stale,

I let up and keep you from your fall,

I started to baby you because I knew you were sick,

Thought you'd be in my life forever but even that’s it,

You won't be there forever and now you have shown me,

That everything has a beginning and unfortunately an end,

I get out and leave you alone for a couple minutes,

But when I try to wake you up, had nothing in it,

Your heart tried to beat and I wish you would have woken,

But now your heart has stopped and now you are broken,

I lay a cover over you and report your body cold,

To late now, for I can never hold,

Your soft hands and feel such warmth,

Now I feel cold and must let you go,

Your heart stopped beating and this is the end,

Give you the proper burial,

You were with me to the end…..



yo tell me what you think, it means a lot, theres a lil bit of confusion in it I lost something but It wasn't human. Ponder on this and give me some feedback



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Last edited by Smooth JT : 11-12-03 at 09:42 AM.
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