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Old 11-19-03, 02:00 PM   #16
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Son, I fathered ya style.. and even your mother loves me...
This kid only sees Chrit.. when I get weekend custody...
...lol, nice...

Quick to give dimense his first loss... But from my alias he already had one...
And fuck a step ahead of Dimense... Try a whole damned marathon...
hmm.. not feelin as much

How you got a shot? It seems like ya constantly losing...
Only time Dimense's the best... is in the midst of confusion...
avg.

Dimense is the blueprint of wackness... Watch as I destroy his plans...
A style that weak should be deemed illegal... Like Divinitys' web cam...
haha... good

Scared to death... Dimense brings new meaning to internet leaks...
Another poser disposed of.... Hey Evolve...
...How bout a challenge next week?
ok..

Ya Under n alias u beat me.. only cuz u needed 10 ppl to help..
U keep changing sn's ..Still.. cant make a Name for Yourself..?
played a little.. but ok .

So he Bites on HHD..claimin switch’d styles.. quit clingin to Fables..
Chrits Kinda like Goldie Locks..
Cuz he’s Stealin every thing I bring to the Table..
lol.. good..

Ur like bulletproof glass.. Actin hard but chrits see Thru
with Audios so wack..that even the Mic Spits back at You..
nope . nice try but not feelin it

Its sad but Tru^..even Begg’d Orgin Ill for a crew Spot..
U Legendary?..How
Ya Cd couldn’t even get over 18 Sales at a Porn Shop….
lol.. little above average

Ur not Black or White?..like johnson..ur a Race Reject..
Savor this Las Breath
Cuz..Ill make u allergic to Oxygen..n watch u Breathe to Death
no ^

overall -

chrit : pretty much throughout this was an average verse. nothing stood out terribly well.. nothing bad either. average, maybe a bit above average.

dimense: you had some filler lines that were average. you came with two lines that stood out.. but you also came with a few lines.. that... dug a hole and buried themselves.. like the closer.
pretty much made both of your verses average.

meh.. dimense coula taken this by not putting up a few wack lines.. and chrit coula taken this by putting up a few "wow" punches.

sorry. after breaking this down i really can't vote.
 
 


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