That was really good there was a couple of lines that I didn't think flow as well as I would have preffered but it had alot of heart. Can I ask you a personal question you said that the girl had one arm is that a metaphor or truth. any ways that was deep Good one can you check out my Forever My Homie

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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17
16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish