This is my first drop sence i got with Soft Focus...so here i go tryn'a rep tha crew....

People arund me have my capabilities tied in'a strict noose
Trying to hold me back but i'm capable of breaking loose
Thoughts flowing through my mind like a river of failure
I'll ride that stormy wave break obstacles be a mighty sailer
Your past is behind you let it be don't let it haunt freely
Your present is now your future is your chosen destiny
Pick a path and cross it ride the life long dead dreams
Power there negatives with your postives by any means
Agents are going to scream at your effort call it hopeless
All will be good if you put on your opticles see with focus
Statues are prevailed to show respect for great aspects
Stand strong hard times come struggle for your respects
Persaverance is your choice of goals hopes and dreams
Three wishes an obscene genie grants for what you achieve
Don't realize it yet, may not look at it from that point of view
Take a moment think your the one who gives ya destiny clues
For the trail you lead weather it is safe or fast or worry
Author of'a book is published at birth now write ya story
Things happen for a reason don't stop because of frustration
Keep ya head pac said,he met god but left as an inspiration
Discover your life direction don't give up inspire determination

Critiques would be apreciated...i didn't use much vocab because this piece is ment to try and give inspiration

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Open Your Eyes
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