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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
12-05-03, 06:32 PM
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Very nice man... I like the part "A whisper being shouted" that says a whole lot. Your vocab was good and rhyme scheme was nice. It seemed like you lack transition from some of your lines but it was still a good peice.
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