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Old 12-05-03, 05:33 PM   #16
MuhThugga
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Dope piece.....the rhyme structure was rather simple but yet it was effective......seemed to tell two different stories and then merge into one ultimate meaning......

I don't know...I read it like that......

Just work on your diction.....though you have a grasp on writing well with rhythm and such...you could have used better words to make the meaning hit much, much harder......
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