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trapped (please dont sleep)
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im new to rb but i wrote this yest. and would really appreciate feedback..
i cried me a river that led to an ocean spilled all my feelings and spread out my emotions you told me you loved me so i let my heart open then you said it was over leaving me crushed and broken i tried building a bridge that would cover the pain but in the past you walked across it and took all i had to gain you got to the other side before i had a chance to change and once again walked away leaving me full of shame i threw my tears in the river along with my soul and let the currents flow take total control as i slowly walked across, the swinging bridge couldnt hold all the weight i was still carrying, so it began to fold i felt the rope shaking from this side to that side so i turned and looked back and saw you trying to hide i realized you were pulling me back, making it even harder to try so i stopped trying to run i decided just fight it back or die i pushed you back trying to get out of your sight but you shoved me over the rope, i started praying for life then you reached out for my hand trying to make things alright i trusted you one last time, and you watched me fall thru the night i hit the water like concrete; gasping for some air waves crashing me against the rocks slamming me here to there then you dove in swimming after me like you cared and i tumbled down a waterfall, why cant this be a nightmare? after the long drop everything became calm and smooth and i attempted to get out the water but i was struggling to move finally, i was washed onto a shore, all broken and bruised i freelycrawled on the beach, and vaguely still saw an image of u CAN I EVER ESCAPE YOUR PAINFUL PLEASURE? OR AM I TRAPPED IN THIS ENDLESS TORTURE FOREVER? thanks...
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my head is clouded with senseless doubt but this seems to be my only escape route so ill slither my way across the ground to avoid my blyndedsoul from being found ~*~YOU LIVE YOU LEARN~*~ Last edited by blyndedsoul : 12-13-03 at 01:07 PM. |
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