yall here i go... lookn 4 full out crit honest opinions!
im typn this shit str8 from da domb (head)


brake a neck wit bare bass
thuds rattle cheaks on a niggas face
sevral times i could kill ya wit ma lyrical ways
picture a lyrical bliss when ya picture this
straight freestyle rap right here right now
this is no diss but I dare yall to get loud
come at me with a better rhyme
i lay ya out by the end of a single line
broken hope after ya hear mine
lost cause niggas rethink they life dreams
a lesser picture of ones self when i serve
dishes of pulsing nerves tears jerk when ya gets yours
thats enough of that though
recap on ma past life
lost mama over a weak nite
no dad 2 hold a nigga tight
thats straight though i hope i never see his ass
if i did id prolly loose control n woop a fools ass

shit sorry 2 brake off but i gots 2 bounce 4 now... ill throw more out later... dont go easy yall tear it to shreds i dont give a shit... tell me yalls HONEST opinions! nething is helpful 4 real!