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Awesome FReestyle Check this gimme sum criticism
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im tryin to rite betta so i started countin sylabbles so id have betta flow
gimme some criticism | belabor is to attack with blows and NWA is a 1988 rap group that is a classic and they had a song called fuck tha police -------------------------------------------------------------- i spit shit that you cant even comprehend // 10 you spit back but this battles without-a-end // 11 ya fucked up youll be the next victim on ER // 11 youll come out looking like some used cigar // 10 "doctor there ain't sposed to be no amputation" // 11 pray quick here comes your termination // 10 i lyrically stabbed u in the heart // 10 your arteries jarred ur gushin blood on my jeans // 12 ambulance gets there ur called dead at the scene // 11 i get arrested cuz my lyrics are so raw // 11 tried to handcuff me so i broke his jaw // 10 ran from the crime scene a fugitive of the law // 12 i stole a car and ran over the neighbor // 11 watch out bitches im known to belabor // 10 ill kill any old hag that does wrong to me // 11 gimme back my mercedes it belongs to me // 12 [chorus] 2x im-a fugitive of the law //8 peopz like my shit cuz its raw // 7 so back the fuck up krines comin thru // 9 dont get outta ma-way ill kill u // 8 cuz im-a motha fuckin fugitive // 10 im headed for the border guns gallore // 10 just now ordered them all by mail order // 10 pop the ak out the side window watch out // 11 crash the car roll on the ground its a shoot out // 11 sqeeze-da-trigger till its totally depleted // 12 give-it-up pigs i cant be defeated // 10 they think why the hell not and call in the swat // 11 suddenly i burst up im another tupac // 12 i yell out like NWA "fuck tha police" // 11 keep fightin till there numbers greatly decrease // 11 fuck peace i wont stop till they start to cease // 10 they launch heat seaking missiles stop tha pistols // 11 im gone but not to heaven im goin to hell // 12 they pounded me down in there like a rusty nail // 12 [chorus] 4x im-a-MOTHA FUCKIN fugitive of the FUCKIN law |
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