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Old 01-06-04, 08:10 PM   #11
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This was decent. Flow was sorta basic. Generic delivery and pressence is lacking. No beef man just letting you know what to work on. Rushed a couple lines. But it's ok. Flow is still consistent.

Ah. Beat switch. I have this beat. Flow is better then the other guy. Pressence is a little better. Delivery isn't. Work on delivery and you might be nice. Flow was consistent. Try not to make a punch-in so obvious. I could pick one out baaaddd.

Lyrics on both sides were ok for a battle. On this site you'd win a lot honestly. But they weren't amazing ya know ? Anyways.. work on that shiz I listed and you'll be better battlers.
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