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lm 5 71.43%
.:FiorZ:. 2 28.57%
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 02-08-04, 10:40 AM   #4
cameronj86
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Quote:
Originally Posted by LM
Ok here I am....

Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs
Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs
didn't like this 1st line esp.
I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear
Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career
hardest line of the verse
Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record
Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored
well... it rhymed
Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand
Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england
Good job rhyming with England, not a great set up tho
I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats
And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz...
blah.. not a great closer at all



Quote:
Originally Posted by Fiorz
Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk
Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk"
I don't see the pic under the browser so I don't get it, but it doesn't sound good
If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em
Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant"
Alright I guess, a lil played
Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury
Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery
I think this was okay, using extended vocabulary
Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:.
Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway
The set-up was weak, but I liked the finishing line
Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz
Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef
how r veggie burgers not worth beef, they don't have beef, but I'm sure they can afford it, played concept n e wayz


Alright so my vote goes to Fiorz, not a great battle guys, I know you can do better, I voted on y'alls batle so please vote on my battle.
 
 


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