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02-17-04, 11:29 AM | #1 | |
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This was a dope piece. Like edicius said.. Multis really enhance your verse as long as they aren't forced and they flow good. Vocab could be upped a bit in parts like Ed said. All in all this was a dope concept.. great story and you could tell you took your time on this one. Stay up.
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