Both verses were pretty similiar, started strong, but the edge in the opener goes to DJ MC for sure. The closing bit was also strong, goes to DJ MC again but by very little. The middle for both was kinda weak, with some kinda overused lines by Ax and some weak punches from DJ. Ax also had better flow, but I think DJ MC had a bit better originality... this was a real good battle and I wouldn't mind seeing a repeat. Much props to both of you, but vote goes to DJ MC.

Return the favor, vote on my stuff so I can improve.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

Ok, n/m guess I can't vote... guess you're regrettin that limit now DJ

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

uppin for votes............................................

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Check Axioms Lines

DJ's chasing a victory, and it's playing hard to get.
I would've ended your career... but it hasn't started yet
So when I trash this fuck, he'll be napping in the ocean.
I don't know what's worse, ya verse, or the fact that you're postin

There u got good word play and a strong punchline

THis line below uses Good Vocab a good punch line.

This battle's regressin, you'll feel bad as gays disperse.
You didnt say I was full of shit... until AFTER I ate ya verse.

And a strong final verse to finish it all off,

Lets play, like your verse came and I'll give you a sneek peek
Kid just came out of the closet, and it wasn't during hide-n-go-seek

See thast a proper verse, droping decent bars

But D'j Also Had Some Good Punches That Connected and hit hard they were heated, just not enough to take the win' was slackin a little bit, but just lost by a nose

votes should be conucted on

personals: Neither Wasnt feelin em
punches: D,J/Axiom
Flow: Dj Had A better flow
Multis: Neither
Wordplay: Axiom
Lyrical Content: Axiom

Over all .....Axiom

(this is a well explained vote)

Yet Both Verses Were Hot.. And Axiom Just Got This SHit By A Pinch...

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Total Votes: 1. You may not vote on this poll

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Kid just came out of the closet, and it wasn't during hide-n-go-seek

hey axiom sorry to do this to you but that was prewritten on old rb...I seen that verse and i still remember it...sorry but i expected more from u..my vote would go to dj...but i think ill cut slack on both..for now...both were good but i have to say None for axiom cuz of that prewritten shit....dont think us old rb folks dont know man...

o yo where did this kids verse go...its no there any more............

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why would he do that.....is he scary or wat...i dont no....thats wierd......

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