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Like endoskeletal skulls, I'll put a shell in ya dome//
Ya rhyme's Kamikaze: Twista'd and unintelligible//
For all that it's worth, bend knees and fall to the dirt//
OF COURSE Hell's better for you, now that RaQ's fallen to earth//
I'm sprayin' till you see the darkness, like a bottle of mace//
Put you "deeper" Underground, turn Mic's "Soprano" to "bass"//
Then riddle ya fit, pissed cuz I'm hittin' you like full clips//
Ya flow's like Dasani: pure, mineralized bullshyt//
Cocksucka, u betta swallow or get off my dick, spittin//
My sick writtens'll split kittens wit brick mittens//
When I "set" on you wit da mic "Son",that'll hurt//
I'll clown you AND another herb wit ONE BATTLE VERSE//
My heavenly flow's cold, you could NEVER wreck the balance//
You should be afraid like lil Joe; He won't even except my challenge//
Tried to heat up the mic, but it froze in ya hand, cuz //
You be focused on garbage like a disposable camera//
Keep searchin' for a style, but I got mine, RaQ shines//
You need to dial my 800-Hot-Line //
I'm pickin' out all the niccaz in ya crew, they don't trip//
The answer is always YOU when I say,"Who dey want FLIPPED"//

ur turn

SHyt..I think i did bad on this one..good luck dawg..

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i kill dis nigga even if i didnt have structure lines.......
cuz wit that weak verse,i really think u lost yo rhymes.....
my gender is 2 kill,he aient even got a male-gender......
he callin out WCW and he da only member........
put yo lyrics in da tolet,cuz that verse was shitty.......
ill back hand u and have u lost, and still get smacked back 2 dale city....
comin at me no words,wit jus lost of skills.......
put a S(shitty)on yo chest,and form a grop wit shaquile oneal......
step away from da keyboard,never 2 try again.......
dont even think about audio,if u cant even get a text win......
he throwin punchlines but he stilll goin get KOed......
yo twin a be vinilla ice,if the eva did a clone......
do i really gotta change yo record in da lost coulun,jus 2 prove u wack.....
dis nigga pareoinoid in dis battle,like a dope nigga on crack......
rip dis niggaz vocal cords,so he cant rap no more,his verse is stucked up.....
cuz nobody wanna hear em,a deaf kid a even tell him da shut da fuck up....
i think u jus LOST wit yo NO RHYMES........
cuz choppa city jus cut u and came wit lesser lines....

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damn that was hella good dawg...your good...i should have known..lolz

wow nice battle from both

nolost good punches decnet multis decent structure
My sick writtens'll split kittens wit brick mittens
i hope you werent impling anything
6/10

chopper you are elevating nicely good structure multis and punches step up the vocab
you could have came harder
5/10
close battle guys

na...not implying anything mitten..alright..lolz..hey..u forgot ta vote

i like choppas structure....and flows....krysis u need 2 work on yo flows...i like ur structure tho....but i gotta go wit choppa

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choppa had some good structure and also better punches.....no disrespect to you, NoLost, but he just came harder.....there was one line that was kinda wierd but still very good......NoLost had some hard hits and punches but overall.......



vote: choppa--city

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nolost4rhymes my bad not krysis

choppa was clearly the winner, nearly all his verse was directed to nolost4rhyms.
choppa consistently kept the flow balanced so you wouldnt loose the beat, but some were basic punches cuz rhyms like : ''......... lines
..........rhyms''
and : ''............ gender
............ member'' .

though he used some personals with cleverness:
put yo lyrics in da tolet,cuz that verse was shitty.......
ill back hand u and have u lost, and still get smacked back 2 dale city....

but i gotta giv cred to lost4rhyms too. i like his complexity of his verse, but i thought he tried a bit tooo hard, hence the confusing rhythm.

my vote goes to choppa.

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yea..chopper is good..but he did have a few shitty rhymes...but i think nolost had better rhymes

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i think nolost got this... but for some reason i thinkin choppa city gettin some people to dick ride for him to help him win.. but nevertheless...

nolost got this one yall both ahd nicely structured lines but his vocab put him veor the topp... liek two or three of chops aint make any since... like this one here..
my gender is 2 kill,he aient even got a male-gender......
he callin out WCW and he da only member........

but nolost had nice lines and only one confusing line this one...
For all that it's worth, bend knees and fall to the dirt//
OF COURSE Hell's better for you, now that RaQ's fallen to earth/
i unno what raq is.. i mean who raq is.