10 lines,
honest votes only,
no crew votes,
Jay to spit first.

ok mr revell sounds like your shit aint gonna go to well/
sweatin like a whore makin a bitch of a smell/
so you are from hardcore manchester, where everyone is a child malester/
as far as i can see you got as much skill as a stock broke investor/
with your gay suit on wishin you could get your grove on/
then along comes jay and all your dreams are gone/
tearin you to shreads with ma lirycal beats, we dont need to take this shit to the street/
ill finish this off before we get to the door, slap you like a little whore/
make shure you know the fuckin score, pop a cap in your ass and make shure its sore/
now that ive spat ma shit ill let you sit in wonder cause ive just hit like thunder/

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so apparently im the one who cant invest,
well im the one who won a million from poppin holes in your chest,
you think that im the one who aint hardcore,
but i keep rhymin and they want more,
you be the kid on the street running your mouth,
but you be the one in a cardboard house,
trying to steal a few pennies to buy some new clothes,
when im laughing at you with all ma hoes,
so now that your a gonna and is down and out,
im gonna leave you with a phrase "wash-out"!

uppin............................................. ....

yeah Was good i know i aint in the battle but fuck it!!!!!

I put the tech to him/
and let bullets stretch threw him/
spray the lead and hit anybody next to him/
im from the gutter plus im toten the rubber/
nigga you lovin on ya girl like a nigga wont slut her/
nigga ill feed you the toast prepare for the supper/
but if i aint toten the mac,garuntee ill cut ya/
you still in the crib with ya aunt and ya mother/
but ill fuck them too either way or the other/
mother fucker im like luda cuz i'm acting of fool/,
ya bitch give brains like she active in school/
bend her over the table like she playing some pool/
you wifed a slut and u think that it's cool/
but first she went in my pants then felt in my drawz
she held my stick in her hand/
and started to play wit my balls/

uppin for votes

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uppin

uppin again

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120187
^^^ vote in mine's

Weak battle.But 2 newbie's,so what can I say?Both of you still need to work,cause if it was against another experienced rapper,you'd both be dead.But this one goes to Jay Dog.What the hell was that revell?You did not really hit Jay hard.Make fun of his name,sig.,and profile.Find anything like that.Same for u Jay.Neither of you had personals.Revell,your opener did not flow.Keep each line around the same # of sllyables.And ur opener,Wash Out?What that all bout.I would give this to easy if I could,cause he did better than both of you.

Vote-Jay Dogg

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right check it easy won this battle!!
nah jus playin, jay dog gets my vote cuz he put up a better performance
both of u had aight flow and structure but any fool can do that. the punches are where it counts and both of u delivered weak punches but jay hit slightly harder and had better connection. both y'all need to elevate a lot cuz against an experienced rapper u wud both get slaughtered. u need to use more personals, multis and throw in sum originality but gud battle for newbies!!
Vote- jay_dogg

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uppin this shit for more votes honest votes please and favers will be returned peace

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how the fuck do i keep finding myself voting for jay dogg when he sucks. other dude just sucked worse once again. damn man. both need practice. jay dogg your ending was horrid. it was fairly consistent, but then finished real bad. didn't think it was possible to finish much worse. your lines made me laugh, mainly because i think you were being serious with them rather than joking around. correct me if i am wrong.

vote: jay dogg

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dren a.k.a. dren rapes u

yo im'a have to say that jay got this one or maybe easy, even though he aint in the battle, jay had harder punchlines,