because on this site the lines are stretching sooo much and punches aint hitting that much

anybody used to battle at the orginal rb?

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Not quite legendary yet....

I didn't... but I've been changing my style a bit.. just picking up shit from here and there...

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I should just post 5-6 or my old LLL verses... so you all get the idea

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yeah, i used to battle over their, a lil bit. I dont know if u have heard of Wise Ways, JockYourself, or T-West, but those are the ones i remember battling. Yeah, better flow and structure over their for sure.

^^^

And yet somehow kids vote against the better flow and structure here

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yeah, because the people over here focus almost 100% of their verse to trying to make punches, and the more punches you can fit with more stretched lines, so they think thats better. Or sometimes they think multies win

Blah...

if either of my verses somehow lose in the league it will be a sad day in text battles....

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Please post some of your verres because your respected in rb as one of the vets.

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Not quite legendary yet....

Vs. Avalon
Where I won the LLL HW Title

Spittin the scrimmage line at some tight ends... so to speak
But Verb's taking it literally... using a gay come on for our word of the week
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Murder this geek... the same kid needing fake personals to win
No wonder, last week I saw ya browsin pic battles on UPN
Done before it can begin, shit, Verb's done nothin but talk loud
So I'll smack ya face straight off-stage til ur just a face in the crowd
I'm reading it now, nice lines, originally from Skull, but whats worse
Is kids material is dwindling down til next week we see a Namix verse
Chrit comes you disperse, we all know it so just face the facts kid
And I'd quote that line from last week... but I have no clue who wrote it
Your dick... voters rode it... and I only voted to sway the herbs
Cause I knew Leths lines would be far more damaging than Verb's
Bitch mark my words, I'm the illest from Merk Squad by far
And dont refute it... as Warren Piece you were banned for biting at RnR
7-5 in RBL... no-showed four times, I know its sad
That the fact the answer to that problem = more wins than Mr E ever had
Always bowling for compliments... So here... You'r hilarious in a way
Or atleast your verse was last year, when you got boo'd outta PBA
Av's gay, no joke, and a proven biter to boot
Atleast the RnR one was fitting..... as an Epimetheus tribute
Verb's going to kill you! Wow, that shit talk finally starting to scare me
^^^^shiiiiit, that has less of a chance of happening than Av winning fairly
You aint street, or even talented... so enough of this God talk
Since you know you only pushed weight.... when Kendra was on top
Destroy this fucking cock, and everyone for who he's claimed to ghosted
And I'd buy into your hype.... But does Aloe know he sold it?
I know it hurts bitch.... but I"m always bound to pick on slow kids
In fact I'll be murdering Verb like the retarded girl in english
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So fuck sayings... Av never has or will whore, son, or merk me
Although it'll hurt like a bitch when he bites me in the UA tourney

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Vs. N Litend
For the MW Title

I hate N... seriously... I cant stand this fruit
Told him to check himself...
...the bitch went and copped a nike jumpsuit
Largos battle features eunuchs...
... but really, this is the kid with no balls
Bout to make a track to N's heatbeat...
...and this battle will fade it into just vocals
And fucka title... I'ma say it all, complete with low blows
After all this kids only champ.... due to a no-show
Hoes still wack as fuck, N's never had much talent
Bout to wrap a level around ya neck...
.....................leting ya body hang in the balance
Fuck kid, you cant win, regardless of what you brought
Quick to slam ya head through the TV...
................................... just to channel ya thoughts
This kid is nothing to me... other than a wannabe vet
I used to love EPMD....
....until I learned thats how you said tha alpahbet
Its brutal,
Quote:
BrIbEoNe1: Dope verse, N's title reign's about to end


Its true I did drop a phat 16....
....like I was dumping N LitEnd's girlfriend

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There's a start

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That second battle is more where I'm going with my style... just trying some new shit...

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i like this more than the old rapbattles anyway i think we should just stick with this

i think punches connect fairly in here so we should just keep it