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Flow got this Nev u were just to weak he hgot u with Punches and complexity

Flow=6/10
Nev=3.5/10

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ok heres the review:

FLOW INTELLIGENT:in my mind,your shit was rocking,you had a solid verse,barely any flaws,flow was good,so was everything else.
best line:im complex..more wordplay than confusion in his text//
i'll let loose and use boots to leave contusions on ya chest//
worst line: N/A
overall:6/10.above average

NEVADAT: not too bad,good flow,but some of your stuff barely rhymed,unless you have a special pronunciacion for them,which you might,but i couldnt rhyme some lines such as:your sexual Choice is havin sex wit ya boys/
Givin neck in the royce wit the tech to his groin/
see what i mean?
best line:this was a toughie considering nothing rhymed but i found this which was average and OK.
Serve him somthing sick Leave him cocked in the bed/
Give him a black jacket where zipper stop at ya head/
worst line:Thank god imma crook ...imma problem sho'/
Drop bombs On flow Like saddam And Bush/
this obviously doesnt rhyme.whered you get dis from?
overall:4/10.crap

VOTE: Flow Intelligent

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Nice battle......
FLow-Everything was put together..structure and all
nice vocab and plus very metaphores...also I liked ya similies..
very understandable structure was easy and I liked it

Nevadat-You was good also....Few hard punches and a few weak
FLow had a lil more betta then ya though...you was tight with it
nie structure......nice similies and metas keep elevatin dog aight
you dont need to work on nothing becuz ya have what ya need to have

v/Flows

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