aight you know tha deal

10-15 lines

no crew
hate
or d/r votes

you spit first

lets get this started

yo check in so i know you gonna show......................

O Yea He Online// But Did U Ask Him Fo A Battle// Well I Dont Know But Its All Good// Yo Dawg Fatha Come On Nigga I Know U Aint No Punk!

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

yeah dawgfatha accepted this in a PM..............

yo i aint dat good so go easy on me.lol

my raps are da be-all and end-all(best)//
rip off yo legs make ya unable to crawl//
im so intimidating i can make da realest gangstas bawl//
you one o' dem wanabees added to ma merk list//
you really dont scare me shakin yo skiiny lil fist//
been engineering dis shit fo da past decade//
leave ya wit no exit like a parkade blocade//
perforate yo ass wit my 9mm AK blade//
i aint here fo a masquerade//
i been around pimp and played//
in da street game i passed wit an a grade//
when ou stepped in hurr you thought you won//
but when i arrived you knew twas the end of your fun//
so go home and revise yo rhymes//
i knew i won before i dropped my lines//

theres my battle.remember,dis is a no beef battle

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aight yo im going to drop in like 15-20 mins

ya no problem.i just hope noone gon sleep on dis battle

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ayo ayo check it..............

your scared to face me-your weak watch tha plot unfold//
i'll have you running from tha "NET" with your hands up like soccer goals//
you spittin like one of them herb bitches new to tha site//
I could give you an uppercut an a jab- but i'll just give you a right//
i'll give him 4 votes-cuz for me to lose he's got to cheat/
you a gangsta huh-then why you runnin when u see me comin down your street/
Im not takin this kid Seriously-cuz he's a joke/
say you makin G's-but we all know that you broke/
yeah-you fags laugh- watch as im rippin others/
say you gettin pussy-but bitch it's probably your mothers/
you tripppin like Leprechauns without their gold/
plus your career is going nowhere-like immigrents without the their boats/

no beef dogg

thats 12 lines

that the shouldnt be in tha last line...o and uppin for some votes

my raps are da be-all and end-all(best)//
rip off yo legs make ya unable to crawl//
im so intimidating i can make da realest gangstas bawl//
you one o' dem wanabees added to ma merk list//
you really dont scare me shakin yo skiiny lil fist//

^^^^ decent flow/rhyming...it's comin off a tad too simple for me
punches are landing, just not that hard


your scared to face me-your weak watch tha plot unfold//
i'll have you running from tha "NET" with your hands up like soccer goals//
you spittin like one of them herb bitches new to tha site//
I could give you an uppercut an a jab- but i'll just give you a right//


^^^^ more complex...good punches/wordplay


Vote: Deleon...more complex verse..better wordplay


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alright now lets get some more votes in here.......

uppin............................................. .........................

uppin............................................. .for votes

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uppin................