alright nice votes i'll try ta get at ya'lls battle's

lets get some more in here

uppin for votes.......

LMAO @ "...had to exceed I was in the zone"...that's laughable

Rough in text, that'll crush a vet from head to rear
Rap's sad from being wack,therefore it sheds a Tear
This guy's soft cuts will be easily blazed..I toss sluts
But, your gender's like a wedding bouquet..a toss up
Kids trust my hardest threw punches will startle you

^^ Kid, ur not even dissing him...it's like ur freestyling or something...FORM then deliver creative punches
Remeber who did this to you..I don't need disguise
Fist packin' heat that'll turn your lungs into Freedom Fires
Yeah I see ya pride and I'll attack until you it drops man
With scripts too tight for Wrists ..like small watch bands..


^^^^ This isn't a battle verse...you are not throwing punches at him...


Just watch how my hot flows puts a stop to this gay..//
The garbage truck stopped by and j's got what it takes//
and you ain’t been through nothin but the bushy fro on your mama's pussyhole//
U-ain’t seen no pain n strife! so how you a gangsta yo//

^^^^ @ least DEL- is throwing punches...pretty hard...some lines rather weak like the "pussyhole" line


Vote: Deleon...for actually dropping a battle verse

aiyo niggaz this battle was hella tight..one of the best ive ever seen probably on RB at least...but i gotta give this battle to J SMITH cuz he came out wit da fire and da punches which is what i look for ....it was a tight battle tho....keep up da work niggaz

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his punches what punches....
anywayz lets get some more in here

uppin for more votes....

can we get some votes........

j.smith...structure woz ok........flow woz decent.....
sum multies/metas in there......
but u lost this battle coz although u had attempted punches....they jus didnt hit hard..no personals
ur wordplay was average..wasnt a bad spit....jus basic, u need to up wordplay/creativity..n work on harder punches

deLeon...stucture/flow woz decent...basically jus all round beta coz u had beta wordplay/creativity
also u had punches...
each line woz a solid punch....
ya closer i thought woz sick....
You a "Soft Thug Wannabe" u aint a glowin kat that empties gatz//
Only time you ever "Hustle for Cream" is openin a "Hostess Pack"//
GUD SPIT........

VOTE DeLeon