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06-17-04, 02:37 PM | #16 | |
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Spul-You came aight and had some nice punches which
murked some part of it..but mainly you took this becuz you had more lines which means you have more punches and more you had some similies and metaphores and strucutre was decent leaving balance good... Engyma-You murked it with the 10 lines..you had some good hard punches and mainly had similies and metaphores and some nice good personals But structure wasnt that aight but you didnt really get this one becuz he had more lines which left him to have more punches v/Spul
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06-17-04, 02:38 PM | #17 |
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You go about posting threads, callin’ yourself a “Family Man”
Spend so much time online, when you get off, you prolly won’t have any land The fuck ^ ? Sorry i dont get this line. Does'nt matter engyma's left the site & i dont know why Why would i need to hate on that?
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06-17-04, 02:38 PM | #18 |
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Battle's already over - Closed.
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