10 Linez.....
no Feeding
House Rulez....
Drop 20 Min After Check...

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check in....
good luck peace....

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check..........
good luck back...................

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You'll pick up the mic .... arms heavy liftin scared,
why crack on bedrock .. when ya already livin there?
I take one look at Illegal then I' thinkin 'y they flow?'
& why u say da Roc gone die when u buy dey clothes?!
If I dont like you... then is true that I'll snipe ya yup!
And you aint good kid, so dont let this site hype you up
Elite.... never that, you couldnt look smart droppin clever raps
Stop n sever rats, punches hit u but u wont remember that!
Leeway? i unno he thinks he'll blow up and be grabbin fans.....
Yea I know..... u thought u'd win wen u never hadda chance

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^ y'd u take that shit bout the roc out ya sig.
put it back in there, thats cheating.

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^^^ uppin 4 votez.................................

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Ambitious-
You'll pick up the mic .... arms heavy liftin scared,
why crack on bedrock .. when ya already livin there?
I take one look at Illegal then I' thinkin 'y they flow?'
& why u say da Roc gone die when u buy dey clothes?!
If I dont like you... then is true that I'll snipe ya yup!
And you aint good kid, so dont let this site hype you up
Elite.... never that, you couldnt look smart droppin clever raps
Stop n sever rats, punches hit u but u wont remember that!
Leeway? i unno he thinks he'll blow up and be grabbin fans.....
Yea I know..... u thought u'd win wen u never hadda chance

you better read your verse again kid....cuz its just wack...some lines didnt even
rhyme.....punches were weak and that personal about the roc were gay...

4.5/10

Prolifick- i think breakin down your verse would be a waste of time becuz
i'll just be puttin his verse to shame even more...ive seen better from you
its like you didnt try....and you still merked him

Seein Vizions??Then My Lines Goin Kill You Like Final Destination.....
Go 2 Rapperz Change Yo Name to Suffer From Humiliation.....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Killed his whole verse..

vote-Prolifick

Thanx 4 da honest vote uppin this tho dont sleep ppl......

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vote on my battle

aiight ambitious...I was feelin ya opener...then u kinda lagged off in the middle.... Prolifiks verses came a lot harder....
Beating Newbs The Only Time You Gettin Applauded.....
He Catching More Boos Than A Drunk Wasted Achoolic......
^^lmao....if yall dont get it...read it like 2-3 more times...nice man....anyways
yall both nice but Prolific brought it harder there fore he gets my vote


and vote on my battle...both of u....and if there is no vote in my battle...I will have my vote deleted rom this thread...Uno

Cmon Dont sleep Lest Close This....................

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Votez a be good....................................

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honest breakdown...

first up is ambitious
You'll pick up the mic .... arms heavy liftin scared,
why crack on bedrock .. when ya already livin there?
5
I take one look at Illegal then I' thinkin 'y they flow?'
& why u say da Roc gone die when u buy dey clothes?!
7
If I dont like you... then is true that I'll snipe ya yup!
And you aint good kid, so dont let this site hype you up
6
Elite.... never that, you couldnt look smart droppin clever raps
Stop n sever rats, punches hit u but u wont remember that!
6
Leeway? i unno he thinks he'll blow up and be grabbin fans.....
Yea I know..... u thought u'd win wen u never hadda chance
4
hmm not great good flow...really taht's all that was good though...bad punches...not good personals...

polifick
Beating Newbs The Only Time You Gettin Applauded.....
He Catching More Boos Than A Drunk Wasted Achoolic......
Must Have Butterbean Cuz Visions His Punches Off Target....
Should Star On MTV Because Polifick Easly DissMisses You.....
He Came 2 Relaunch Because He A Replacement On Original......
Asscending Ass whoopens Go back 2 Origanal lyrical Crippally....
He Stay In Cypher..Because Thats As Close He gettin 2 a Victory....
30-12...Dont Try Audio Because even Yo textness Is wasting.....
Seein Vizions??Then My Lines Goin Kill You Like Final Destination.....
Go 2 Rapperz Change Yo Name to Suffer From Humiliation.....

pretty good...not great...i've seen a lot better from you...no personals...good structure ...decent flow...a couple of funny disses...

v-polifickk


RETURN THE FAVOR>..I TOOK THE TIME TO VOTE HONEST ON YOUR BATTLE NOW PLEASE VOTE HONEST ON MINE>...thanks

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130312

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^ are u all serious.?

no wonder why i dont post on this site,
most of you suck at voting, n knowing whats hot.

upp.

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