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06-25-04, 09:01 AM | #11 | ||
i changed my title !!
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breakdown for shadow:
flow:working alright some prety good internal rhymes at the start of it good job 7/10 volcab:alittle above basic but nothing to great 6/10 punches:some alright punches but mainly playd ideas like dick rider lines and shit try abit more on this part 5.5/10 overall:18.5/30 breakdown for ketch22: flow:alittle sctreched on the bars some internal rhyming but not enough i felt 5.5/10 volcab:good use here no problems 6.5/10 punches:good lines better then your oppenent my fav,"You could be Stephen King & still wouldn’t Make-IT-my-man,**" good job here 8/10 overall:20/30 vote--ketch22
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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