Metah: I felt like you had good structure, and the overall flow was great. The punchlines were hitting, however the last 6 lines i didnt like the wordplay. They didnt seem to fit together well, and it made your verse end weak. Also, you didnt need to numbers, I think everyone can count punchlines.

KCF: You also had good structure, I believe you had the better flow. You def hit him hard with the personals. Your punchlines just sounded a lot harder than his, and you had much better word play. I think "Screename" and "be the same" sounds better than "Pheonix" and "Penis".

Vote = KCF

i'm the founder of blueprint..and passed my leadership down to vango....cuz i wasnt active..enough....and that could make my crew fall ...but I'll tell him about you...but we pretty much closed the open tryouts

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Blue Print

B.P.

Ya i know u did but i already got accepted pretty much like 2 days before it got closed so wat good??

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how about i come back to you on that.... i'm bout to go to sleep i'll get with you tommorrow

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Blue Print

B.P.

wtf...

killacam: wtf that confused me that line didnt make any sense...bad vocab...bad structure...bad flow...ok personals...bad structure

metahk punches ok personals...good vocab..sum multi's...no meta's structure ok and flow ok

vote: metah

i aint gon' poll vote until u drop a vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131994

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Metah- Your verse was aight but i really didnt like it much. You had some decent structure.Your flow was good too also.But your punches didnt seem to hit hard. and i really didnt like em.You had some decent wordplay.But overall you came pretty decent..but elevate manye....

KillaCam- Your verse was aight also. You had also a decent structure. But you had a better flow then him. Your punches were good they hit harder...which means you get my vote for better hard hitin punches...need i say more....

V/KillaCamFlow

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Wicked One vs C-Bo

Vote goes to kcf

Both verses were weak, but killa had better vocab and flow

Metah- You had a wack opener and a wack closer, and the rest of your verse had played, generic lines. You had nothin that really stood out, and you can work on your flow and wordplay. Try to come wit better personals, and lose the numbers.

KCF- Pretty lame verse also, but it was better than Metah's. Same thing, nothing special, your only good line was the " mind and pen" line. You had better flow, which helped you, and vocab was slightly better.

Vote:KKF

weak verses....killa cam kame harder...nothing else to say

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125456

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