u start spittin
10 / 15lines
15mins max
no crew votes
no hate votes
no d/r votes

Nigga Ill make it a mission to kill yo ass like on "Free Willy,
wanna battle me, u silly homie u dont know me really//
This nigga dont know what its like to be in a set,
His punk ass cant spit on da streetz so he do it on the internet//
This bitch some shit, he sick and tired of loosin,
If me and him fight, bullets gon be flyin and this pussy gon be sewin//
Bitch u should know I take no prisoners Imma kill this man,
Or else Ill leave you half steppin wit a cane in ya left hand//
Yo da best rappers spit first, and all that bullshit second,
Fuck all yall that dont believe it, Cheers to who respect it//
This bitch cryin over me fyin his ass, what a sob,
Ill be shootin and leave u full of holes like Spongebob//

yo yo nice, black pantha got that shit heatin.....

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what u talkin bout fool this aint sum movie for kids
try sumthin else if u wanna kill me next time u spit
hold the fuck up why lookin so though u aint hardcore
i'll fuck u up with 1 shot & drop yo body in the harbor
mayb u got the chance to meet spongebob on the bottom
black pantha u aint nuthin for a killa & im bout to bust some
can't u get pussy in yo hood , that why u lookin for a bitch on the net
u betta watch yo back , u better start fight in sum cartoon, now u gotta go to bed
i aint got time to waste my fuckin time on u just sum new fake

yo i think hellrazor got this 1....
punches were
structure : so so (but betta than mine i guess)
rhymes were good too...

vote : hellrazor....

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Yo that stuff aint count
XxXTASY THAT WASNT NO FULL EXPLAINED VOTE
YOU SUPPOSED TO EXPLAIN BOTH MC'S PROBLEMS
You just said that dude won wit out explainin wat i did wrong
thats that hate vote stuff

Anyway u know I really won dis

Uppin for votes..................
help a brother out

come on now..........
plz

uppin...................

Black Pantha
structure was good...ur flow was pretty stable...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

HellRaZoR
structure was wack...it started off good, but then started to come with stretched lines...flow fell off cause of the change in structure...u had a few metas...wordplay was decent...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a few metas...neither had good personals...black pantha had the better structure and a more stable flow...he also had better wordplay, as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...black pantha gets my vote...

VOTE - BLACK PANTHA

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx man...

Not a bad battle, I think Black Pantha was a lot harder though. He was good with the flow, structure was decent...had a few nice metas. Opened the battle up very well I liked that, cause he really dont know you lol. Try some more metas, and personals, and throw a couple extra multis in there, and the flow will be a lot better. (not that it wasnt nice)

Black Pantha you were feedin off his verse, with the sponge bob comment and ya still couldnt throw hard punches. Your structure was straight then at the end it went to hell and was gettin all streched out. No real creativity with the rhymes, they were pretty basic. Need to elevate and come HARDER next time. No real personals, metas, or multis.

v/ Black Pantha

hellrazor u jus got wokred kid......black pantha one this easy.....it was a weak battle but black panthas punches hit harder and hellrazor fed off the sponge bob thing(which was gay) both yall need to elevate.....returh the favor in the links in my sig....

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Thanx I got yall
still uppin.....................

uppin......................
plz