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Genicide steps to the mic for yet another victory*


shit this nigga thinks he is hot cause he is ill tempered…
after I spit so sick leave this bitches body lyrically dismembered

I knock this nigga down first round and he don’t want no more..
This bitch is done… put a fork in him.. And im only on line four..

why they call you ill tempa anyways… cause ur rhymes arent sick
you probably caught a std u bound to from riding so much dick..

With all the herbs u have ko’ed that’s practically cheating
nigga with that wack verse…my cock is the only mc ur beating*

Bitch you couldn’t handle me even when I was in Fatal Tactic
u always got a hard wood everyone knos that so it aint a classic

explanations:
first letters of my cock are mc

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Yo Genecide, that’s yo name? It sounds like a “STD”//
This nigga must be crazy thinking he can “fuck” wit me//

There’s no way, shape or form that ya lyrics could harm me//
Cuz I’m gonna rip you like clothes from tha Salvation Army//

You say ya flow is tight and you nice but no one believes ya//
And yo “structure” is fucked like tha “Leaning Tower of Pizza”//

You wanna represent for your people in this battle, tha Fatal Tactics//
I’ll outline yo whole crew in chalk and leave Genicide in a bag of plastic//

It’s amazing how I come up with these lyrics, some may say it’s magic//
My spits are “Hard”, structure’s sturdy as “Wood”, I’m a true “Class-Sick”//

Yo rhyme scheme is distorted beyond belief, ya lines is stretched like elastic//
I’m gonna be nice and give something away, here’s a loss, you can have-it//

You know I’m “hot” cuz I live in Florida where it’s always “sunny”//
And always handle my beef, cuz I got more “straps” than a “mummy”//

People laugh at you punches, cause they corny not funny//
It’s ILL Tempa I do more damage than a crash test dummy//

I think you learned yo lesson, so go back to geekin on yo computer//
I got one last question, answer honestly, how’s it feel to be a loser?//

eh this was a good battle fo' sho'
that fork his done line is extra play'd genecide but you verse was aight your structure seemed messed up made it very hard to determine wether your verse actually flowed at all or not.
Ill Tempa came with decent structure and punches that were hittin hard, or at least harder then Genecide's hits. The structure made it easier to determine flow and the flow for tempa was good.
soooo... vote IllTempa

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DaTruth29 [~*Lady Fiya*~] shake-spear Trooper Nova

damn nice battle..good punches thrown by both of u
gen..

why they call you ill tempa anyways… cause ur rhymes arent sick
you probably caught a std u bound to from riding so much dick..
^nice personal on his name and good punch, a little played but iight

With all the herbs u have ko’ed that’s practically cheating
nigga with that wack verse…my cock is the only mc ur beating
^hot bar right there, good punch and flow

u had good flow and ur punches and personals hit hard

ill..

Yo rhyme scheme is distorted beyond belief, ya lines is stretched like elastic//
I’m gonna be nice and give something away, here’s a loss, you can have-it//
^nice bar, good punch and nice flow..
ur rhymes were a bit simplistic but ur flow was good and some of ur punches hit, but gen's hit harder and more on point

v/genicide


Crew vote removed

everthing seemed pretty equal besides the power of tha punches, Genicides punchs hit harder than tha other boy's. YOu kno wut im sayN? Alrite boi peace. Gj both of u tho. Keep up the worK.


Crew vote removed

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dick riders ya were in the same crew so you cant vote scrap and dubz

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A crip just like Bonecollector

its not a dr.. we were a crew for not even a week.... soo i dont see how it is a dr when i dont even know em

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My Lines Are ILL yo

and anyways.. lethal lunitic arent u missfiyagurl???? under a different name and u vote for urself.. thats a little bit of dr too.. no hate tho i just dont wanna seem like a dr cause im not tryin to do that

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shit this nigga thinks he is hot cause he is ill tempered…
after I spit so sick leave this bitches body lyrically dismembered
^^Nice..line...good personal...7/10
I knock this nigga down first round and he don’t want no more..
This bitch is done… put a fork in him.. And im only on line four..
^^Ok..line...not very creativite....6/10
why they call you ill tempa anyways… cause ur rhymes arent sick
you probably caught a std u bound to from riding so much dick..
^^^LOL...LOL..LOL....7/10
With all the herbs u have ko’ed that’s practically cheating
nigga with that wack verse…my cock is the only mc ur beating*
^^ok lines.....7/10
Bitch you couldn’t handle me even when I was in Fatal Tactic
u always got a hard wood everyone knos that so it aint a classic
Nice closer....8/10
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Ill...tempa
Yo Genecide, that’s yo name? It sounds like a “STD”//
This nigga must be crazy thinking he can “fuck” wit me//
^^OK..line nice wordplay...7/10
There’s no way, shape or form that ya lyrics could harm me//
Cuz I’m gonna rip you like clothes from tha Salvation Army//
^^Kinda weak....5/10
You say ya flow is tight and you nice but no one believes ya//
And yo “structure” is fucked like tha “Leaning Tower of Pizza”//
^^Really weak line...4/10
You wanna represent for your people in this battle, tha Fatal Tactics//
I’ll outline yo whole crew in chalk and leave Genicide in a bag of plastic//
Nice lines......8/10
It’s amazing how I come up with these lyrics, some may say it’s magic//
My spits are “Hard”, structure’s sturdy as “Wood”, I’m a true “Class-Sick”//
Nice stuff......7/10
Yo rhyme scheme is distorted beyond belief, ya lines is stretched like elastic//
I’m gonna be nice and give something away, here’s a loss, you can have-it//
OK...line....6/10
You know I’m “hot” cuz I live in Florida where it’s always “sunny”//
And always handle my beef, cuz I got more “straps” than a “mummy”//
People laugh at you punches, cause they corny not funny//
It’s ILL Tempa I do more damage than a crash test dummy//
^^^^...both lines...really weak....6/20
I think you learned yo lesson, so go back to geekin on yo computer//
I got one last question, answer honestly, how’s it feel to be a loser?//
^^Ok closer.....5/10

Overall..i thin...genicide..won this battle...he did lsesser lines..but i think he won this battle iight..No d/r vote here just honest iight..Close battle tho

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A'ight...not the greatest battle...but Genicide takes it.....simply for much better punches...flow and structure was pretty good on both sides....but it was still a one-sided battle...genecide had some nice punches...Ill tempa...you came a;ight...but you need to elevate ya punches and personals a bit...no hate...

Vote- Genicide

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It was a lil hard to call since ILL came with a few more lines, he had more content to judge from.

Both of yall was on que with the flow...so i couldnt really pick from either of them. Just call it a tie there.

I think ILL tempa had better punches, he was tryin to get syck with it, the personal hype line shouldnt have been in there. Ive used the lines that have 3 metas in them though, so its a tight line for that reason. Genicide had some good punces, I wasnt feelin the ones about put a fork in him, and beatin my cock though.

I think ILL was a lil more consistent overall, even though both of them had some syck lines.

v/ILL Tempa

yo i dont wanna hate cause im cool with ill tempa... and i dont want no beef but ya'll said im D/R well i was just winning this battle 4-1 i minute ago now its 4-3 soo i dont know it smells like a little dr but hey its cool

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My Lines Are ILL yo

yea but them cats that voted for you are in ya old crew and these cats that voted for me i don't even know