spit: op
pucnp
flowp
vocab: op

dis was a really weak battle like the others sed, but coming to punches, he won...

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give diss battle 2 opt
head had a better flow
n structure IE had sum wordplay
but i wasn't feelin it really n
ur ounches didn't hit so hard
v/OPT
vote on deez battles
DRAG~ON VS ecko(crew battle)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722

definatfully(punchline)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142312

V0cab
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141251

Jono
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142463

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OPEN BATTLES
DRAG~ON VS Tha Phoenix
DRAG~ON VS BOSTONLYRICIST(Rematch)
DRAG~ON VS INSANE16

iight this battle was kinda weak. imma go with i.e. cuz even tho his punches werent exactly as hard as opt's, i.e.'s were more thought out and more creative like the aol line and the nintendo game line. both need to elevate on punches cuz they were a lil weak and both also need to work on structure a lil bit more. most of the categories were even tho.

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Soundclick

Weak battle. Optimized took it with more original punchlines. All intensify was talkin about was how hes gonna put bullets in him. No creativity whatsoever. Optimize takes it on the structure too. His lines were even and not all over tha place like IT's. Optimized takes it with a better structure and more creativity in punches and shit like that.

Vote-Optimized

RETURN THE VOTE....VVVVVV
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i'd vote for omptimized, mainly just because i hate I.E.!

he recycled in our battle when it clearly says NO RECYCLING BITCH!!!!!


fuck intensify effect



.......peace........

^^^^ recycled what bitch??

get off my nuts.....

with ya 1st grade rhymes

BReAK DoWN


Optimized verse

i'll leave u wet, this work out aint worth a sweat
sponge bob ya system, have u soakin from razor gellets
ok line i guess...6/10
you'r a basic treat, wouldnt even worn the rapboard
papmer you'r style, cause you'r shit about to look like crap-more
minore improvement...6/10
the facts store, like i compact ya style into microsoft
dont strain and act hard, cause your emotion are about to go soft
weak....4/10
take a pain-killah plus liquer, it might intensify you'r effect more
so dont panic or get leavft stiff like manicans in the back-store
nice attemp of a metaphore....5/10
so dont look cause u just might miss and hit post reply
my flow like gahnariea cause im know to burn more then just between those-thigs
pretty beat finisher......7/10

Overall=28/50



Intensify effect's verse

im pulling out the knife with enough anger my dick willing to bang-ya
trap ya in a box, stab it with my ox, N toss it down a hill cuz ya verse a flop
kinda soft.......5/10
u dont want me to travel with my 32 heat
cuz im ganrenty to hit the center and leave ya underneth
real weak.....4/10
its like i took lesson from AOL cuz shot i'll pop up with my AIM
and have u feeling violated as if u found out i've been hitting ya dame
kinda corny but the AIM was ok....6/10
change ya name im here to change ya fame
with a shot that'll leave u blown out like old nintendo games
nice metaphore attempt 6/10
and fuck viewing the poll results as if u was stoping this
cuz my effect is leathal N deadly like aids if u wanna be so positive
good finisher....8/10

Overall=29/50

Vote: Intensify effect

upp'in............................................ .....

Opt killed intensity...his Punches were harder than int's...tha structure & flow was good..and a nice wordplay

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lyk dey all said weak battle but opt got it with some punches all organal but aleast he had some ok puches opt got my vote but ok battle bit weak but ok
plz return the favour on my battle in my sig
v/ opt

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"weak battle." why u fools sayin the same thing over and over?


Optimized verse

i'll leave u wet, this work out aint worth a sweat
sponge bob ya system, have u soakin from razor gellets
good 6/10
you'r a basic treat, wouldnt even worn the rapboard
papmer you'r style, cause you'r shit about to look like crap-more
Not feelin 3/10
the facts store, like i compact ya style into microsoft
dont strain and act hard, cause your emotion are about to go soft
weak. 4/10
take a pain-killah plus liquer, it might intensify you'r effect more
so dont panic or get leavft stiff like manicans in the back-store
that was ok 5/10
so dont look cause u just might miss and hit post reply
my flow like gahnariea cause im know to burn more then just between those-thigs
that was not good 3/10

Intensify effect's verse

im pulling out the knife with enough anger my dick willing to bang-ya
trap ya in a box, stab it with my ox, N toss it down a hill cuz ya verse a flop
kinda soft
Um that was ok 5/10
u dont want me to travel with my 32 heat
cuz im ganrenty to hit the center and leave ya underneth
4/10
its like i took lesson from AOL cuz shot i'll pop up with my AIM
and have u feeling violated as if u found out i've been hitting ya dame
6/10
change ya name im here to change ya fame
with a shot that'll leave u blown out like old nintendo games
8/10 some good multis and punches.
and fuck viewing the poll results as if u was stoping this
cuz my effect is leathal N deadly like aids if u wanna be so positive
Nice... 8/10

Overall I.E has got this..

return the fav in the sig, homey.

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Turnheads Grafix

Turnheads Vs CODEE [5-1]
Me clownin Nomercy

pretty weak battle but i was feelin optimized, cause he hit harder wiht his shit, and intensity your punches were pretty weak and iddnt hit very hard

vote: optimized

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upp'in this yet again and again.........................

upp'in this battle.........................................