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For$akeN 5 83.33%
phatinum 1 16.67%
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Old 07-28-04, 08:40 PM   #1
phatinum
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From: tha ghetto
For$akeN vs phatinum
IP: 3BE3 3095

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-31-04 at 07:40 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.
 
Old 07-28-04, 08:41 PM   #2
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phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 07:41 PM.
 
Old 07-28-04, 08:42 PM   #3
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For$akeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 07:42 PM.
 
Old 07-28-04, 08:49 PM   #4
phatinum
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From: tha ghetto
IP: 3BE3 3095

yo punk ill eat you 4 lunch fell the crunch yuor dat wossy on da side line wid a 4 inch pussy ill crumble you like a cookie i might still b a rookie but im still that leathal kid on the block and ya times runnin out yourll b gone in sixty seconds tick tock ill put 9 shots like tupac but straight to your jaw im gonna take da left to the exit door understand you lost this battle stunned i take a gulp of air wen i spit just before i run look around this aint no fun you betta think twice before i get a gun
 
Old 07-28-04, 08:53 PM   #5
For$akeN
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self-glorification lines is how this damn kid was a made...
this boy couldn't blow up on the scene if he was a grenade...
phatinum....you ain't phat you couldn't rap if you tried...
you rhymes couldn't be in my "division" if you could divide...
wouldn't let you re-cord in a studio if he remade a string...
you can't add up to me even if you were fuckin' "A-Ccount-Ing"...

*a string is a cord fam..... remade a string=re-cord

and I hope you are can see my last line was wordplay on counting...
 
Old 07-28-04, 09:07 PM   #6
KroNuz
 
From: New York
IP: 7BE2 A0A1

Voted For: For$akeN

Battle Verse 1: Good Structure Flowed Ok, Punches Hit, The The " " Dont Make Ya Verse Any Better.....

Battle Verse 2: Your Structure Was Bad, And You Punches Were Weak And Wordplay Was Played....

Punches: 1
Flow: 1
Wordplay: 1
Metaz: Tie
Multis: Niether
Originality: 1
Structure: 1

Final Vote: Battle Verse 1

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Old 07-28-04, 09:22 PM   #7
DeHotBwoy
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From: Dub-Town
This was feedback posted for For$akeN
IP: BDA3 2D11

Who is Who how am i suppose to tell!!!!!!
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Old 07-28-04, 09:31 PM   #8
For$akeN
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you are supposed to vote for the person you think did better
and you can tell if you saw my structure before................
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Old 07-29-04, 01:16 AM   #9
For$akeN
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uppin 4 votes............................................. ......................................
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Old 07-29-04, 05:44 PM   #10
G_$peed
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Voted For: For$akeN

fors$aken had this one cuz he came wit harder punches. thats all

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Old 07-31-04, 01:50 PM   #11
For$akeN
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uppin sleepers im getting pissed mayn............................................
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Old 08-01-04, 09:45 PM   #12
For$akeN
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uppin 4 votes again............................................. ..........
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Old 08-01-04, 11:32 PM   #13
For$akeN
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Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp!! !!!!!!!
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Old 08-02-04, 10:01 PM   #14
For$akeN
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uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppp
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Old 08-02-04, 10:14 PM   #15
Black Pantha
Banned: Cheating
 
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From: DC (aka murda capitol) 501 boys
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Voted For: For$akeN

Dis battle is straght up obvious
For$aken took this one beacause of wordplay,punchlines,structure, and flow
All of which phat did not have or at least not visible itcould have been a little longer though 8/10
(no offense ofcourse)
Phat ur structure was messed up
Im just sayin dat it would have been a pretty good verse if u had a good enough structure
STRUCTURE MEANS ALOT!!!
4/10



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