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Old 07-29-04, 07:11 PM   #1
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clam's just history, he's edged out into this horror mystery...
He's screamin... "there's a flaw in the system,...
................................cause i can't grab a single victory"...
7/10...ok opener
His only defence weapon is yellin, "records don't mean shit...
The earths only male ditz, to battles clam brings his own first aid kit...
7/10...nice..
Throwback sigs came back in, he thought writting was going back too...
Lost to two more herbs, i guess the only kid that thought that was you...
5/10...?
But we should give him a medal of some sort, he did defy Nasa's Warning...
Cause this kid raps with such little hotness,
.................................................. .that he ended global warming...
7/10...good punch
Can't take JP in his hay day, cause he's just a lost online gaming whore...
you're bruce and i'm ashton to the core, you can't win!!!
.................................................. .........cause i'm the one doing moore
8/10....fuckin dope closer
overall - 6.8...ok drop


Calamity
the closest you'll get to any votes is in your name..
like he ran in wheat fields,his text skills so plain..
7/10...good opener
theres no way, a person of your status should lose to me..
only time he holding a Hot Rock,is palmin stolen jewelry..
[b]6/10....meh...

are you a emcee or a herb....seems its hard for you to choose..
kinda hard reppin blue prints when he cant fill there shoes..
7/10....nice...
yea aint no nanny in here boy,in this battle your all grown..
Prolly hard for him to prosper,when no ones riding "J's Poll"..
6.5/10....ok
Go ahead and find ya links, it wont save ya verse from landfills..
He thinks hes spitting at high speeds...dudes skillz at a standstill..
5.5/10...no
overall - 6.4....u ended weak...threw you off...
v/jpoll
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Old 07-29-04, 10:28 PM   #2
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clam's just history, he's edged out into this horror mystery...
He's screamin... "there's a flaw in the system,...
................................cause i can't grab a single victory"...
NOt really that good
His only defence weapon is yellin, "records don't mean shit...
The earths only male ditz, to battles clam brings his own first aid kit...
NO...
Throwback sigs came back in, he thought writting was going back too...
Lost to two more herbs, i guess the only kid that thought that was you...
*lowers head*
But we should give him a medal of some sort, he did defy Nasa's Warning...
Cause this kid raps with such little hotness,
.................................................. .that he ended global warming...
An attempt at wit, but kinda fell short...
Can't take JP in his hay day, cause he's just a lost online gaming whore...
you're bruce and i'm ashton to the core, you can't win!!!
.................................................. .........cause i'm the one doing moore
Nice wordplay.....only OK line in the battle

You still have a really stretched style and you need to step up your punches a little more. This is a tourney, if you don't bring your best shit, you could get sent home...


Calamity
the closest you'll get to any votes is in your name..
like he ran in wheat fields,his text skills so plain..
Played name punch.....I've seen it a hundred times
theres no way, a person of your status should lose to me..
only time he holding a Hot Rock,is palmin stolen jewelry..
Not really feeling it...
are you a emcee or a herb....seems its hard for you to choose..
kinda hard reppin blue prints when he cant fill there shoes..
I don't see where you are trying to go with this....
yea aint no nanny in here boy,in this battle your all grown..
Prolly hard for him to prosper,when no ones riding "J's Poll"..
Another played name punch....
Go ahead and find ya links, it wont save ya verse from landfills..
He thinks hes spitting at high speeds...dudes skillz at a standstill..
No real punch here either....

I was pretty disappointed in this one. I really thought it would have been a better battle, but both came weak. JPoll had a line that I thought was OK so I guess I'm giving this to him....

Vote - JPoll
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