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Old 07-23-04, 09:30 PM   #1
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4. Jpoll 'vs' 5. Calamity

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L.I has been moved to a different battle. I don't like 3-ways either.
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Old 07-23-04, 11:17 PM   #2
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haha i always get fucked...stupid fuckin three ways...check
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Old 07-24-04, 02:08 AM   #3
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Check lol..

edit: Battles iv voted on
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137067
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Old 07-29-04, 04:03 AM   #4
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The bitch in calamity...
10, please drop the same...

clam's just history, he's edged out into this horror mystery...
He's screamin... "there's a flaw in the system,...
................................cause i can't grab a single victory"...
His only defence weapon is yellin, "records don't mean shit...
The earths only male ditz, to battles clam brings his own first aid kit...
Throwback sigs came back in, he thought writting was going back too...
Lost to two more herbs, i guess the only kid that thought that was you...
But we should give him a medal of some sort, he did defy Nasa's Warning...
Cause this kid raps with such little hotness,
.................................................. .that he ended global warming...
Can't take JP in his hay day, cause he's just a lost online gaming whore...
you're bruce and i'm ashton to the core, you can't win!!!
.................................................. .........cause i'm the one doing moore
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Old 07-29-04, 04:21 AM   #5
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the closest you'll get to any votes is in your name..
like he ran in wheat fields,his text skills so plain..
theres no way, a person of your status should lose to me..
only time he holding a Hot Rock,is palmin stolen jewelry..
are you a emcee or a herb....seems its hard for you to choose..
kinda hard reppin blue prints when he cant fill there shoes..
yea aint no nanny in here boy,in this battle your all grown..
Prolly hard for him to prosper,when no ones riding "J's Poll"..
Go ahead and find ya links, it wont save ya verse from landfills..
He thinks hes spitting at high speeds...dudes skillz at a standstill..
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Old 07-29-04, 08:17 AM   #6
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Quote:
Originally Posted by JPoll
The bitch in calamity...
10, please drop the same...

clam's just history, he's edged out into this horror mystery...
He's screamin... "there's a flaw in the system,...
................................cause i can't grab a single victory"...
Nice personal quite witty.

His only defence weapon is yellin, "records don't mean shit...
The earths only male ditz, to battles clam brings his own first aid kit...
Nah man.

Throwback sigs came back in, he thought writting was going back too...
Lost to two more herbs, i guess the only kid that thought that was you...
u had a personal in there but the whole throwback writing wouldnt be something someone would be envious of doing. If ur sayin he wants to write a throwback style it wud be full of old played punches..so that punch didnt really make sense.

But we should give him a medal of some sort, he did defy Nasa's Warning...
Cause this kid raps with such little hotness,
.................................................. .that he ended global warming...
That wasnt great. Global warming is effecting by so many other things his verse would be irreleavnt to it. I kno its just a punch but its not even good.

Can't take JP in his hay day, cause he's just a lost online gaming whore...
you're bruce and i'm ashton to the core, you can't win!!!
.................................................. .........cause i'm the one doing moore
That was quite tite actually. Funny closer.


the closest you'll get to any votes is in your name..
like he ran in wheat fields,his text skills so plain..
decent. seen similar stuff

theres no way, a person of your status should lose to me..
only time he holding a Hot Rock,is palmin stolen jewelry..
crap.

are you a emcee or a herb....seems its hard for you to choose..
kinda hard reppin blue prints when he cant fill there shoes..
not feeling greatly.

yea aint no nanny in here boy,in this battle your all grown..
Prolly hard for him to prosper,when no ones riding "J's Poll"..
his name play was played. Ive seen losted riding Jpoll lines.

Go ahead and find ya links, it wont save ya verse from landfills..
He thinks hes spitting at high speeds...dudes skillz at a standstill..
nah not a good closer.

Jpoll took this with more witty & complexity.
 
Old 07-29-04, 07:11 PM   #7
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Jpoll
clam's just history, he's edged out into this horror mystery...
He's screamin... "there's a flaw in the system,...
................................cause i can't grab a single victory"...
7/10...ok opener
His only defence weapon is yellin, "records don't mean shit...
The earths only male ditz, to battles clam brings his own first aid kit...
7/10...nice..
Throwback sigs came back in, he thought writting was going back too...
Lost to two more herbs, i guess the only kid that thought that was you...
5/10...?
But we should give him a medal of some sort, he did defy Nasa's Warning...
Cause this kid raps with such little hotness,
.................................................. .that he ended global warming...
7/10...good punch
Can't take JP in his hay day, cause he's just a lost online gaming whore...
you're bruce and i'm ashton to the core, you can't win!!!
.................................................. .........cause i'm the one doing moore
8/10....fuckin dope closer
overall - 6.8...ok drop


Calamity
the closest you'll get to any votes is in your name..
like he ran in wheat fields,his text skills so plain..
7/10...good opener
theres no way, a person of your status should lose to me..
only time he holding a Hot Rock,is palmin stolen jewelry..
[b]6/10....meh...

are you a emcee or a herb....seems its hard for you to choose..
kinda hard reppin blue prints when he cant fill there shoes..
7/10....nice...
yea aint no nanny in here boy,in this battle your all grown..
Prolly hard for him to prosper,when no ones riding "J's Poll"..
6.5/10....ok
Go ahead and find ya links, it wont save ya verse from landfills..
He thinks hes spitting at high speeds...dudes skillz at a standstill..
5.5/10...no
overall - 6.4....u ended weak...threw you off...
v/jpoll
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Old 07-29-04, 07:31 PM   #8
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i honestly couldnt decide....imma brake it down later tonight n post my vote
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Old 07-29-04, 10:28 PM   #9
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Jpoll
clam's just history, he's edged out into this horror mystery...
He's screamin... "there's a flaw in the system,...
................................cause i can't grab a single victory"...
NOt really that good
His only defence weapon is yellin, "records don't mean shit...
The earths only male ditz, to battles clam brings his own first aid kit...
NO...
Throwback sigs came back in, he thought writting was going back too...
Lost to two more herbs, i guess the only kid that thought that was you...
*lowers head*
But we should give him a medal of some sort, he did defy Nasa's Warning...
Cause this kid raps with such little hotness,
.................................................. .that he ended global warming...
An attempt at wit, but kinda fell short...
Can't take JP in his hay day, cause he's just a lost online gaming whore...
you're bruce and i'm ashton to the core, you can't win!!!
.................................................. .........cause i'm the one doing moore
Nice wordplay.....only OK line in the battle

You still have a really stretched style and you need to step up your punches a little more. This is a tourney, if you don't bring your best shit, you could get sent home...


Calamity
the closest you'll get to any votes is in your name..
like he ran in wheat fields,his text skills so plain..
Played name punch.....I've seen it a hundred times
theres no way, a person of your status should lose to me..
only time he holding a Hot Rock,is palmin stolen jewelry..
Not really feeling it...
are you a emcee or a herb....seems its hard for you to choose..
kinda hard reppin blue prints when he cant fill there shoes..
I don't see where you are trying to go with this....
yea aint no nanny in here boy,in this battle your all grown..
Prolly hard for him to prosper,when no ones riding "J's Poll"..
Another played name punch....
Go ahead and find ya links, it wont save ya verse from landfills..
He thinks hes spitting at high speeds...dudes skillz at a standstill..
No real punch here either....

I was pretty disappointed in this one. I really thought it would have been a better battle, but both came weak. JPoll had a line that I thought was OK so I guess I'm giving this to him....

Vote - JPoll
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Old 07-30-04, 06:25 AM   #10
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clam's just history, he's edged out into this horror mystery...
He's screamin... "there's a flaw in the system,...
................................cause i can't grab a single victory"...
ok, dosent hit hard tho
His only defence weapon is yellin, "records don't mean shit...
The earths only male ditz, to battles clam brings his own first aid kit...
doesnt diss him that much
Throwback sigs came back in, he thought writting was going back too...
Lost to two more herbs, i guess the only kid that thought that was you...
wack
But we should give him a medal of some sort, he did defy Nasa's Warning...
Cause this kid raps with such little hotness,
.................................................. .that he ended global warming...
quite tight but a played concept
Can't take JP in his hay day, cause he's just a lost online gaming whore...
you're bruce and i'm ashton to the core, you can't win!!!
.................................................. .........cause i'm the one doing moore
ok closer
7/10

the closest you'll get to any votes is in your name..
like he ran in wheat fields,his text skills so plain..
shit
theres no way, a person of your status should lose to me..
only time he holding a Hot Rock,is palmin stolen jewelry..
played concept
are you a emcee or a herb....seems its hard for you to choose..
kinda hard reppin blue prints when he cant fill there shoes..
did that one go over my head?
yea aint no nanny in here boy,in this battle your all grown..
Prolly hard for him to prosper,when no ones riding "J's Poll"..
quite tight, probs ya best line but still kinda played
Go ahead and find ya links, it wont save ya verse from landfills..
He thinks hes spitting at high speeds...dudes skillz at a standstill..
no punch

6/10

i gotta give this to j poll
both came really weak but j poll was jus a lil better
shud have stepped it up rele

v/ j poll
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Old 07-30-04, 12:16 PM   #11
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lol blue prints as in shoe prints...blue shoe prints.. and i was saying he cant live up to the blueprint expectation.. cant Fill there shoes skill wise.. but iunno maybe i shoulda said it differently..w/e tho..^thanx for voting guys..
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Old 07-30-04, 02:08 PM   #12
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good job calamity...
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Old 07-30-04, 06:05 PM   #13
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no disrespect to you tho J.. you know it was only battle shit.. hehe .. yea back at you..
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Old 07-30-04, 06:28 PM   #14
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i know...a battle is a battle...no hate...
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Jpoll moves on. Good battle.
 
 


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