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07-30-04, 11:26 AM | #16 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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v/ Li Lot
Terrible battle though... Bark/bite line from Lot was coo I guess. LI's was readable. Mad Dog... just elevate a bit... try to read good battles and the such.
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07-30-04, 11:42 AM | #17 | ||||
yawn
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made it horrible on purpose... didnt need it to be good. 2-0 us...
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07-30-04, 01:43 PM | #18 | ||||||||
Heavy Lies The Crown
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word^ mad dogg just work on wordin your lines better to make thme shorter an help hit harder but structure is fuckin pointless some of the shit u had was ight just could of done alot more with a 2 on 1 battle lady incarnated aka l.i didnt try so really no need to break donwy a shit same with liquorish on termites dont need to go in depth of the verses vote li/ crossword puzzle
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07-30-04, 04:57 PM | #19 | |||
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it was a bad battle I agree but honestly li and lot were and had a better verse
so my vote goes to li and lot
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07-31-04, 12:24 AM | #20 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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LoT & L.I....You Two Had Decent Verses...LoT I Was Surprised At How Wack You Came...It Was A Bad Verse And Something I Wouldnt Expect To See From You...K.I Your Verse Wasnt Too Good Either But It Was Better Than Mad Dog's Alone I Think If PJ Would Have Shown And Dropped Something Hott This Would Have Been A Closer Battle...Mad Dog Work On Better Personals Harder Punches And A Better Rhyme Scheme...Your Structure Isnt Too Good Either I Think Putting It Inot Lines Instead Of All The Periods Would Be Hotter...You Had A Decent Verse But Not Enough To Beat L.I And LoT Better Luck Next Time
V/ L.I & LoT ~!1!~ Drop A Honest Vote On My Tag Battle In The League Pz
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07-31-04, 10:21 AM | #21 | ||||
yawn
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^ thats sad, cause you said if he came and dropped it would have been a CLOSER battle... hahaha.
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08-01-04, 03:51 AM | #22 | ||||
Still Sick
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IP: 1662 B67D
^I like your sig.
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08-01-04, 09:43 PM | #23 | ||||
yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
Yeah, i stole it from some kid who wasnt worthy of handling such a creation he made...
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08-02-04, 12:17 AM | #24 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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Closed L.I./LoT win 5-0
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