my feed back is that DV8 knocked his ass out!

It was over when dude put this down
*no beef
Yo DV8 good luck aight
let tha best man win*lol

my fav line was
*Battlin me? ya brains doin a“tight rope act”ya minds lossed a sense of balance,
Actin hard but U only”hold ya own”when ya mommy’s handin ya your allowance*
*Shit kid I could still win if I was “dyslexic” written in a mirrored image bout physics,
Your punches always go unnoticed n disregarded like mothers day in abortion clinics *

its a wrap...RUSH LIMBAUGH OR whatevah ur name is?
Go get sum rest...the best man is typin this post 2 U.
holla atcha jones!!

i must say nice verse but i can't vote because of the F.U.B.U. thing check this LAST line... it's a battle of mine from a long time ago...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=125266

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damn i had no idea...honestly i would never copy shit....i guess its bound ta happen with some lines,srry fiya was'nt but i dint bite that jus ta let you kno.

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Voted For: DV8

Rush your style is just faded man it seems like you didn't try at all no real hard hittin punches at all structure needs a lot of work mane no hate at all try the tutorials out mane good luck in future battles this time you just didn't come with it....

DV8 mad respect for you votin like you do this is not a hate but the kid be votin on the real ... nice use of links in your rimes punches was gunnin one aftah the other some misses but mostly hittin...good use of wordplay nice structure

both stay up stay active vote often...

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HITS

DaTruth29 [~*Lady Fiya*~] shake-spear Trooper Nova

upppiiinnnn....................................... .......

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Voted For: DV8

ones sided...

rush...punches ere weak weak...strcutre and flow could have been better..wordplay..didnt see any..elavate

dv8...you took this..strucutre and flow was on point..punches hit harder..creativity and wordplay was good...keep it up

v/dv8
better overall verse
return the favor and hit my battles up in my sig

uppin............................................. .....

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Voted For: DV8

lol...

rush: wtf was that.. that was weak as hell.. no offence.. but you had nothing.. 0/10.. that was a 6 line keystyle, that was a weak one at that.. step yo gme up and put down some punches man.. that wasent a batler verse..............

returning vote rofl at rush..

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Voted For: DV8

Yo Man. I ant even Gonna Break this Down, DV8 you Took this Fairly Easy wit Punches, wordplay, and Personals.. yah lines were Kinda Strected.. But it was aight, Good Verse..,

Rush No hate man, But yah really Didnt Have a Battling Verse man, But keep at it and Elevate... Read other Peeps battles, and see how they Use Wordplay and shit.. kno what I mean!



Return the Fav, Vote on a Battle in My sig!!

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