(Talking)
Yo Black Cat blood
this is my life blood
this ones my life
are take you from start to finish
this is my life blood

Verse 1
age seven blood mums is sick
docotors say she might not make it through
bodys rejecting the drip and theres nothing we can do
Blood she made it they sent me to live in boarder school
maybe only for a week or two
This life consists of smacking up boys and sneaking food
Im on the phone mum can i come home in a week or two
Theres nothing we can do kinda keeps me beating dudes
Like Oi Nigger come here who you speaking too?
under this anger teachers think theres a decent dude
And once in a while i'd smile and knuckle down
But in this town it was a curse to be seen as soft
And hoildays at home was no better
My brothers annoying and my mums a stressing cuz theres no cheeder
But deep in my heart i know she was a go getter
The only time we had some DOE's when my brother died
hey yo that dick i wished i'd fucking stabbed him
I saw the moves plus i heard the screams my uncle got murdered
My aunt got wifed up by some murder teens
Them yardies with scars on there face keeped them burning clean
So dont tell me in my life i aint ever been hurt

(Shouting)(x3)
This is my life BLOOD

Verse 2
Age thirteen shit got excessive the beats got agressive
The truth boarder school called it abuse
n they sent me out to live with my dad
All i could think bout was the trips and fun at the weekend
Throught out the transformers and the cinema trips i couldnt see
How much my momma stood for me when she had me she knew she could
And when she was pregnant have me blood she knew she would
But when your young you dont understand what the stress can do
But know shes got i finally got the message 20 came
And i done felt plenty pain me and my man hustled
And learned how to play the game and then they came
What?paper of course finally we had some money to floss
some queens heads to toss YO then we quickly moved to thousands
Brought some rides and moved up out of council houseing
My man started whileing you should see the gold he had on him
We busting thoughts bottle before you know what it was
So fuck holding honours we live a secret society type of code of honors
In this life its so dishonest seeing these demons
Its so real when you seeing me eating i can count on my gang
Becuase they wanna be seeing me eating Trust me that bust me
thats why you aint even seeing me breathing beleive me

(Shouting)(x3)
This is my life BLOOD

Verse 3
Age 21's the hardest of days picked up afew sharp wounds blood
A couple of scars along the way made some money lost it
Drove afew new cars in the day bust cases lived on the run
Saw afew bars on the way mum died while i was in prision
In them situations the voices you hear up in the dark you listen
Hit the road blood and set myself a misssion like fuck this
Im gonna be dead or im gonna be rich the way im hustleing
Oh mum i wish you could see this for real i already learnt what greed is
And now i truely understand what the breed is n the seed is
To find yourself 'n' create a legacy showing the things u never seen
And rest in peace to the dead soilders in every dreams
Im gonna roll like a legend and this flows for you london
And that just myself pledgeing offen asking me questions?
bout where my flows headed(Laughts)to a road to the charts
when my album drops blood just make sure you attending a wedding

(Shouting)(x3)
This is my life BLOOD

Im going to be truthful.
lyrically, this isnt a good peice.
but the thing that makes it good is the emotion you put into it.
and the pain you are going through.
and if you just knew how to word your shit, it would be extremely better.
keep droppin man, and keep putting that emotion.
just elevate with it.
pZ.

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ur shit was good , lots of emotions and shit, keep it up ,peace 1luv

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