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Old 08-16-04, 06:48 PM   #1
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DRAG~ON (0-0) vs sdizzle (0-0)

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Old 08-17-04, 02:20 AM   #2
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check one check two..... dizzle shittin on you
 
Old 08-17-04, 12:15 PM   #3
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yo had 2 take care of business
but im here check
 
Old 08-18-04, 05:32 PM   #4
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ayo
my lines r hotter den brimstone blown by DRAGON(s) breath
so S DIZZLE get turn into D SIZZLE by da flyest chef

said chef cuz it say here dat u from da dirty bean
so i'll wipe u off,cook u,n eat u like collard greens

i'll slap ya face n do like "pizza hut" n "twist the crust"
off ya lips cuz every thing u spit is old as fuck

so u winning is like da Dolphins quaterback Dan Mari'No'
u couldn't get da 'deal' why i ate ya bars like 'chips' n a 'casino'

n ya rhymes go look at cds n BEST BUY dat shit
cuz if u was BARRY BOND's bat u still wouldn't have a hit

so quit playin 'Poker' dawg........ ya 'shit' is out
keep rollin da 'dice' on ya life wit me u bound 2 'crap out'
 
Old 08-19-04, 12:52 AM   #5
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wow...... wow..........

check it

ur verse was dirt.... and ur rhymes rags to me
only thing u did... was drag on the agony
wack ass verse.. so why should i try when ur that weak
with a completely wack verse... an dnothing directed at me
theres a few sports players... and sure u mentioned my name
but ur such a fucking fruit... or should i say ur a flame
see thats a personal, not mentioning random people and events
cuz if u was titanium u wouldn't get bent.. get it.. not bent
let me refrain from stooping to ur level with dribble like that
cuz i can make u go from on to off... with a simple clap
 
Old 08-19-04, 04:59 AM   #6
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upping for some votes................................
 
Old 08-19-04, 02:14 PM   #7
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yo we still uppin 4 vote
 
Old 08-19-04, 05:48 PM   #8
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lol none is voting....
i gotta give it to Dizzle for a more better and directed verse with ok persoals dragons wasnt very directed and his punches were kind of weak but props
dizzles structure was ok and so was dragons

Dizzle final vote
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Old 08-19-04, 07:03 PM   #9
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my lines r hotter den brimstone blown by DRAGON(s) breath
so S DIZZLE get turn into D SIZZLE by da flyest chef
5/10...wack...your only personal
said chef cuz it say here dat u from da dirty bean
so i'll wipe u off,cook u,n eat u like collard greens
5/10...weak
i'll slap ya face n do like "pizza hut" n "twist the crust"
off ya lips cuz every thing u spit is old as fuck
4/10....no..
so u winning is like da Dolphins quaterback Dan Mari'No'
u couldn't get da 'deal' why i ate ya bars like 'chips' n a 'casino'
4/10...wack again
n ya rhymes go look at cds n BEST BUY dat shit
cuz if u was BARRY BOND's bat u still wouldn't have a hit
6/10...simple...
so quit playin 'Poker' dawg........ ya 'shit' is out
keep rollin da 'dice' on ya life wit me u bound 2 'crap out'
5/10...not feelin it...
overall - 4.83...weak, 1 personal...punches were weak


ur verse was dirt.... and ur rhymes rags to me
only thing u did... was drag on the agony
7/10...good...
wack ass verse.. so why should i try when ur that weak
with a completely wack verse... an dnothing directed at me
6.5/10...truth.
theres a few sports players... and sure u mentioned my name
but ur such a fucking fruit... or should i say ur a flame
5/10...wack
see thats a personal, not mentioning random people and events
cuz if u was titanium u wouldn't get bent.. get it.. not bent
4/10...wack
let me refrain from stooping to ur level with dribble like that
cuz i can make u go from on to off... with a simple clap
5/10...weak closer
overall - 5.5...both weak, u did better...
v/dizzle
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Old 08-20-04, 08:15 AM   #10
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v/dizzle and there is no need t explain Drag was wack..
pz.
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Old 08-23-04, 10:34 AM   #11
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due to better word play..and more of a dominant verse...vote dizzlestructure was good,wordplay matched the theme of the verse

drag...your not thatfar away from being nice son...your just missin modern day and creativity punches kidd..
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Old 08-24-04, 03:00 PM   #12
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ayo can we please get sum
more honest votes ya
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Old 08-30-04, 10:57 AM   #13
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sdizzle wins...
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