here ya go guys heres ANOTHA one of my songs or w/e....

Escaped pains like Cape-less heroines, struggled like wingless seraphines
Life willed me to death, but pulled me back again
I twist rhymes and bend flows outta joint-less elbows, impel foes to tagged-toes, rhyming shows I’m BETTA than the next hoe
Branded with a high standard, risin continuously; mind’s flight has never landed
I transfer my soul to the masses, can’t be anything BUT candid
A destitute mind hungered for all the intelligence I could find
But in the midst of getting signed, I crumbled emcees; I guess you could say I was on the grind
More than a broken spirit, I approach with a boldness, cause I’ll lose, if I fear it
The mic needed resuscitation; I cleared it, produced a beat so ya’ll could hear it
Niggas tried to lure me straight to their bed, must have thought I lost my mind, like severed heads
Polluting my conscious, but I read through the lines they said, only looking to fuck but never to wed
They beat me down, left me for dead, seen as another statistic for pregnancy
Implanted in my womb was the next generation of rivalry
There was never a time I was stress-less; This milked me for ALL I HAD, like I was breast less
Too many were quick to talk wreck less, so I snatched away their gems to leave them neck less
My treacherous texts rips through underserved vets like I step on chests the way they’re short on breaths
Back to the wall, Traps set, so I could fall; But did I fail? Not at all; My survival leaves many appalled
I was destined for greatness; If that means I have to inflate chests with metal to make my statements, then bodies will lay filling the pavements
I refuse to misuse my skill, or lose my will, to light a fuse to my kill; The same ones who held back the dues, BUT STILL, I conquer their diseases even though I’m way more ILL

**Hasn’t been a time when my struggles don’t exist. A verse to let ya’ll see, BUT the pains, too much to list**

can i get some feed back plz?

Nice flow, this was good, try to keep the structure in order, it will read better to peeps, but you had dope vocabulary in this piece, nice job..1

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thanx 4 da feed...yea i do tend to go off structure n shit...sorry..but again thanx

you a bitter nigga get the fuck out of herr

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code steel

excuse me? who u talking too?

ur vocab and use of ur vocab is hot LIL C also i like ur lyrical content and feel.keep up the good work

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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE

you lil bitch opps i mean lil c

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code steel

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BITTEN JUST LIKE YA OTHER VERSES!KEEP IT UP

it was not bitten! u know u r gettin on my nerves about dis whole bitten shit

its on my demo bitch!!!! wanna hear it?

Naw....I don't waste my time wit BITTEN shit.......

no beef because im from the d and so are there just jokes if you need some help pm me your # and you can get down with unmortifed records because i maken moves

no beef but if you still fell like something wrong holla at me on front lines

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code steel

do wat? if u dissin me n shit then HELL naw i dont wanna but if u serious then maybe