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Old 10-07-04, 09:53 PM   #1
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Meh, this battle was not bad, Kinna weak on both parts though I think.

Anyway

Plutonium,
Your verse was pretty decent you had some nice punches and good wordplay there, Only thing that I thought was maybe wrong, was that some of the bars could have used a few more syllables, but that might have been just the way I read it.

Yvonne,
This was ok from you, I have seen better, your punches were pretty good, but your vocab wasnt really on top.
put his hands on a scale..and his punches would never be heavyweight
^that line did have me laugh tho :d

Overrall, this was pretty good, but my Vote, Plutonium
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