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Old 10-10-04, 01:08 PM   #1
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I just don't give a fuck!
 
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KING SOLO:

Touched and I see ya loss, like psychics from The Dead Zone
Have (R)ipped by (I)nfinite (P)unches carved into ure headstone
Nice Opner...The Meta Stood Out...7/10

Each battle droppin the same shit, fuckin verse set on replay
Bitch ure Going, Going, Gone! Cudn’t sell ure shit on eBay
Get The Cocept Just Wasn't Feelin It...5.5/10

Make ure name glow red and white and still never get a mention
U ‘bout as welcome as a reggae band at a Ku Klux Klan convention
LMAO!!... Dope Punch....8.5/10

Lines complex, u breathless like Whitney, “Waiting to Exhale” needin cpr
My verse has u more confused than a fuckin hungry baby in a topless bar
Holy Shit, Lmao! Didn't Reall Link With The Opener But That Shit Was Funny 8.5/10

Round 2 u gone lose, I’ll take ure knife and use it to slice herbz
U an AI “Titanic” intellect…but this is a world full of “icebergs”.
Decent Enough Closer 7.5/10

37/50
Nice Structure. Ya Flow Was On Point. You Had Some Mad Metas In Here. Funny as Fuck. Some Of That Shit Made Me Go oooo. lol.. Tight Verse.


[~*Lady Fiya*~]

U.r K.nights will vote to get ya steering wheels on right! [U.K., European cars]
even Council limit ya fight, king revised before...

Quote:
Originally Posted by Judge & Jury
then vanilla ice was tight
Tight opener....Nice Personal And Wordplay And Metas. Shit It Was A Tight Bar 8.5/10

The King's a hobo, your wardrobe got sewn patches for pockets..
Trade ya personals fa logic, by forcin' our plug in European sockets?!
Nah, Not Really Feeling that Shit. Decent Though 6/10


ya shocked @ "7" loses, now ya cheat so ya verse'll "die loaded"?!
tourney forbode him, first round a rematch, you crown's eroded?!
Again Not Really Feeling That But decent 6/10

depressin' ya ego, ya drove ya first loss to state ya under-Rated?!
he's battlin' under the standard since your retirement up-dated!!
Lol Nice Personals. Links Worked Nice Wit This. 8/10

ya punches stay waitin', cuz your bars roll off ballots like teflon!
this cross/word, up 9 lines, across 1= my name got the bets on!
Nope Wasn't Feeling That.....7/10

35.5/50

Ok Nice Verse From Both Of Ya. Nicely Structured Verses. Flow Was on Point all The Way Through. I Give This To King. While Fiya Had A Couple Of Nice Personals...I was Going On Which Verse Was The Most Interesting For Me To Read. Which was His. He Just Had Mad Metas. Couple Of His Punches Were Mad Funny. Both Had Nice Verses. Fiya Had Real Nice Multies But They Only count For 5% Of The Battle.

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