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10-11-04, 01:51 AM | #1 | |||||||
No Relation To Tina
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True Life Hero....hate Me Now Instr.
IP: A1C0 0CC2
this is just part of the 1st verse of this song....its about a soldier in iraq...just something i am feeling right now....its to the hate me now instrumental.....please give me some feedback on this.....if u think its wack...tell me.....if u think its hot...tell me....thanks
TRUE LIFE HERO Hault regular lives, steps aside for the lessened hype/ as he accepts the pride to provide and its somewhat unrecognized// but lets it slide cuz he catches vibes/ from the techs and nines// each moment less deprived of outlooks on aspects of life/ the test is right here to make it out iraq alive// writes his family letters just so he can pass the time/ half the time you wonder what goes through his criminal mastermind// the truth is he wants to get back to what he calls disaster;life/............................................ tell me what u think |
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10-11-04, 02:03 AM | #2 | ||||
That's Right...I'm White
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IP: 731E 07B0
Pretty dope, wish it was longer, flow was really good, vocab was pretty decent, nothing really bad to say about this. Just make er longer, and it's will be a dope open mic. I never really heard hate me now, so i don't really know the beat, but i just read it the way i felt you meant it was spoe to be read, and it flowed really well that way.
Anywho keep droppin, much respect return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=154365 |
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10-11-04, 02:18 AM | #3 | |||||||
No Relation To Tina
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IP: A1C0 0CC2
thanks for the props....i know that you have heard the hate me now beat....the nas and diddy song..
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10-16-04, 06:29 PM | #4 | |||||||
No Relation To Tina
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IP: A1C0 0CC2
somebody hit me with some feedback
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10-17-04, 09:42 PM | #5 | |||||||
No Relation To Tina
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IP: A1C0 0CC2
uppin for feedback.....tell me what u think
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10-19-04, 04:00 PM | #6 | |||||||
No Relation To Tina
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IP: A1C0 0CC2
cmon hit me wit some feedback
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10-20-04, 04:39 PM | #7 | |||||||
No Relation To Tina
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IP: A1C0 0CC2
damnit can someone hit me with some feedback....shit
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10-22-04, 07:06 PM | #8 | |||||||
No Relation To Tina
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IP: A1C0 0CC2
i give feed to alot of yall.....and i get none back.....please can i get some feedback.....damn
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10-22-04, 07:35 PM | #9 | |||||||
Light Weight
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feed back
IP: 847F A168
Yo,,,hommie this was a dope piece an the word play was hot
I hope to see more from you soon,,,9-10
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10-22-04, 11:04 PM | #10 | |||||||
No Relation To Tina
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IP: A1C0 0CC2
thanks.....youll see more of me....uppin for more feed
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10-23-04, 04:39 AM | #11 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: 7958 8A90
yo like verbatim said... wish it was a lil longer...
but other than that.. this shit was str8 nice vocab... and u should record dat shit wit da beat.. cuz its a hot beat and peeps would really feel ya flow den... nice shit tho.. 9/10 |
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10-23-04, 06:12 AM | #12 | |||||||||
...Belong...
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
it was ok but ya need to lose the / // bits we know where the verse ends lol...and i got that beat too and im using it now lol
5.5/10 kepp droppin though u'll improve
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10-23-04, 06:14 AM | #13 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 8F91 4990
i wasnt feeling this, it wasnt deep enuff, a peice like this needs to be deep, u had too many fillers an some lines didnt connect at all
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10-23-04, 03:16 PM | #14 | |||||||
No Relation To Tina
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IP: A1C0 0CC2
uppin for feedback
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10-23-04, 03:35 PM | #15 | ||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
blah this fuckin sucked...(you can hate me now)....
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