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10-10-04, 04:41 AM | #1 | ||||
That's Right...I'm White
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Rhyme for the Moment
IP: 731E 07B0
Aight it's been awhile since i dropped anything, i'm a little rusty, anywho this goes to the beat for "sing for the moment", hence the title...this is just a rough draft, and it's not finished.....
everynight i sit a home thinkin about my perfect life so much anger built up, so i pick up a pen and write lyrics on the page and release some rage angry self watchin the ink sribble down on the page i'm wondering where my friends have gone, it's like..... now that ive go a job, it's like i've done something wrong but what they don't understand, i'm trying to move on that's why it's been awhile since i wrote a fuckin song if you don't understand me then how can you judge me and when you walk by me, why ya always gotta nudge me like you got something to prove and something to show it's clear to me we're no longers friends, i know we're foes i tried to talk with you, tried to sort this shit out but i guess it's not meant to be, i'll have to live without so until we finish this nothing will ever be fine sit back relax, cause i'm still not done with this rhyme rhyme with me, rhyme for the year rhyme for the laughter, rhyme for the tear rhyme with me,just for today maybe tomorrow, the good Lord will take you away now lets move on, come on now we gotta get real every lyric i write, you know it's how i feel whether it's emotion, dissing, whatever i share there's atleast one line in my rhymes you can compare your life to, "like damn...i can relate to this" so you continue to read and listen as you reminisce http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1650530 Drop some feed, drop links, i'll return favor.....word |
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10-10-04, 02:32 PM | #2 | |||||||
you gotta hear me again
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IP: 8983 E628
damn i like the xchorus the idea basically the hole thing was off the hook i give it 9/10
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10-11-04, 01:33 AM | #3 | ||||
That's Right...I'm White
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IP: 731E 07B0
thanks, uppin for more freedback
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10-11-04, 02:16 AM | #4 | |||||||
No Relation To Tina
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IP: A1C0 0CC2
i love the idea....i have one pretty much just like this...with the same idea and all.......i loved the hook.....only thing i can say somewhat negative is that there werent a whole lot of multis.....but other than that.....it was nice
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10-13-04, 04:27 AM | #5 | ||||
That's Right...I'm White
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IP: 954C 8C82
uppin for some feedback, drop links i'll return the favor
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10-13-04, 05:16 AM | #6 | ||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 98E7 2C88
diz iz eminem song u jst changed da wordz
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10-13-04, 10:50 AM | #7 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: 9253 500F
what up ur right i could relate to some things...like since i quit dealin n got a job my friends all look at me different n it's like im trynna do better for myself n they dont respect that
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waddup gangsta!?!?! R.I.P. Isaiah Ryder 7/11/82 - 2/26/04 tell all my people i'm a Ridah nobody cries when we die we outlaws let me ride until I get free I live my life in tha fast lane got police chasen me-Tupac |
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10-13-04, 03:16 PM | #8 | ||||
That's Right...I'm White
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IP: 731E 07B0
hottnessdefined? OMG are you serious i didn't have a clue....it's called using the same beat.
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10-13-04, 03:21 PM | #9 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: 2436 5733
thats shit was aight but everyone has already used that idea
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10-13-04, 04:02 PM | #10 | |||||||
Ya Skills Are Just Myth
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IP: 666C F77E
good shit verbatim, liked ya flow, the hook and liked the idea, 8.5/10, holla at me sometime for a collab or something and drop honeset feedback on "Doomed Fate-Double Homicide: MT/Myth"
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10-14-04, 08:36 PM | #11 | ||||
That's Right...I'm White
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IP: 731E 07B0
Word, thanks for the feed, i'd be down for a collab, i'll pm ya here soon
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