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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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lets go

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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Reloaded has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 02:35 PM.

Sub-0 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 02:37 PM.

bout to get on this bitch sub-0/
lil nigga only a lyrical zero/

ill fry your ass any kind of way/
leave your ass frozen in an ice tray/

i aint even feeling your lines a little bit/
even if you came out a dog ass you still would not be shit/

sub-0 i know your feeling me/
instead of a k.o. i turned this into a fatalitie/

upping for votes........

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he's choking.............

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Your rhymes like dog shit they only hot for five seconds.
I have dis nigga body parts assorted in plastic bags like chex mix.

Have dis nigga taking more falls then niagra.
The only time he go gard is when he take viagra.

Dog I shoot real bullets while you shooting paper clips.
The only thing you reloading is powder from your moms fake tits.

This man stomach growling like he was starving like hell.
Well if he dat hungry ill be quick to feed him a shell like Taco Bell.

uppin 4 votes

im back in this joint now he scared.

Voted For: Sub-0

Aiight Lemme break it down

bout to get on this bitch sub-0/
lil nigga only a lyrical zero/
^^WHACK AS FUCK
ill fry your ass any kind of way/
leave your ass frozen in an ice tray/
^^Is that a punch?
i aint even feeling your lines a little bit/
even if you came out a dog ass you still would not be shit/
^Finnally kids ont he board...
sub-0 i know your feeling me/
instead of a k.o. i turned this into a fatalitie/
^^^Okay mediocre closer

Weal as fuck. Ya'll need help. 2/10


Your rhymes like dog shit they only hot for five seconds.
I have dis nigga body parts assorted in plastic bags like chex mix.
^Whats with the dawg shit lines?
Have dis nigga taking more falls then niagra.
The only time he go gard is when he take viagra.
^^Mediocre punch
Dog I shoot real bullets while you shooting paper clips.
The only thing you reloading is powder from your moms fake tits.
^^WTF?!?!?! WEAK
This man stomach growling like he was starving like hell.
Well if he dat hungry ill be quick to feed him a shell like Taco Bell.
^Aiight ok closer
Elevate like fuck
4/10

Vote-SUb-0

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Voted For: Sub-0

ok i like the clean structure of both verses and i personally like these short sweet battles, it shows how much talent one has in very lil of space.both were not close to be too long, reloaded was maybe a lil to short which hurt his hittin ability, so i dont think he hit as hard, "o" hit hard with every line i like how seconds and chex mix was rhymed that shows good talent, and the last line was a good ender, both did well but this goes to sub.

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