yo VP, when we gonna do our collab in audio for breath man....

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ooo

sups sups....

...Deuce
put me unda Text

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

Are you in the definition?

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well his sig says he is....

Its either Da R.I.P. or the Definition kid, cant have both....

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Newest member of da R.I.P, Xplicit

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Newest member of da R.I.P., Xclusive, soon to be one of our audio geniuses....

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aight ima drop this coo its


bitch I take 3 min to load my gat/
and a couple more to make a track/
your like 10 u aint even got hair round yo nut sack/
just a faggot is wat u are/
when u came out tha closet u came out way to far/
runnin all over u for days/
only person u can have wins over are gays/
dog this shit will hurt if I swallow but what if I choked/
my neighbors callin the poilice on me cuz of tha faggot I smoked/1
man heres another win/
so thats another sin/
this is str8 from my brain/
im only half way insane/
u have an issue/
get a tissue/
and leave this site no one will miss u/

I used this on xclusive lemme know if its good or not pm me!!

and xclusive if u win ill respect u aight!

THUGLIFE...now that i know what you spited im not gonna try haha..

Was good wit u this yo boi Anamasity comin threw 2 try ou check this out

Ill have these niggas comin up wit punchlines 4 days/ and niggas battle against me winnin is like dumb kids makin A's/And im a quiet lil nigga but i set off alarm/The only way people can beat me is if they eat lucky charms/And when i use punchlines i dont need consentration/I kill niggas just to send they souls on long ass vacations/And when i let a kid know the deal they sometimes cry/My threats are more serious the p-Diddy tellin people 2 vote or die/And im from that fuckin naptown i aint from the souf/ the only shit these niggas spit is the salava out they mouf/I got some enemies on Rapverse and they wont my style/Because they know im a bigger problem then lil bow wow

Yeah, you got room to elevate, and i believe i can help you with that. Welcome to Da R.I.P.

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ahh 4 real im in

yea not bad the stucture was off and yer shortening the spelling throwes people off thats all remember that make your verse look like this

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yours is like this

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^you know what i mean? theres some easy help. there

Yeah, did you bring some niggas, cause i just saw someone wit naptown in there name

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