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11-04-04, 07:56 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
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naw your stucture is messed up still...try and werk off my verse for are battle i had soem punches that were iight but my lines were forced a lil but i still merked you...and my stucture is perfect and flows perfect.. |
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11-05-04, 03:11 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
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does anyone else think i made it in???  |
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11-05-04, 08:18 PM
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#3
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
hey G:duece like this? if so lemme join but if no ill go away!
didnt ppl in school teach u not to fuck with me/ aint no one in any of my raps gonna get credibility/ to take me out your gonna need an organization/ so im takin your ass out by persuasion/ when u lose your gonna get kicked out ya crew and have a exclamation/ ill have u act different like a fluctuation/ man im gigantic/ ill be playin your ass as a gimmic/ man your shits old like a played out lyric/ |
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11-04-04, 07:34 PM
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Artist, that simple
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IP:
sorry kid, but you need to elevate more ight...........
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Grim |
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11-05-04, 05:23 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP:
yo this crew anygoodz.... i jsut wanted to see if idd make it in cause i dunno what crew i wanna be in yet... heres a quick verse...
im complex..more wordplay than confusion in ur text/ i'll let loose and use boots to leave contusions on ya chest/ severly i'll slay ya sentences cause a homicide investigation/ be mindful of who you're facin..i'll leave eyes and anus adjacent/ but lets stick to tha facts..i stay twistin ya back/ treat ya spine like cocaine habbits..and stay addicted to crack/ double up this thug wit uppercuts thats rockin ya neck/ knockin the left side of ya jaw up to the top of ya head/ as far as disses go...they're gay please make them end/ cause u stay under the weather..especially when its rainin men/ |
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11-05-04, 06:50 PM
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^i say in too... ... ...
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..The Council..
7 Day Theory |
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11-05-04, 01:25 PM
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CHEDDA BOI
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i say in ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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11-05-04, 06:50 PM
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Artist, that simple
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uppin for recruites..................
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Grim |
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11-05-04, 06:52 PM
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Artist, that simple
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IP:
yeah he's raw, just sended him a pm.............
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Grim |
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11-05-04, 08:26 PM
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Flyweight
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IP:
lyric and gimmic dont rhyme right...and Gigantic didnt rhyme with anything in that verse..
For what it's worth in RIP..I vote No.. Keep improvin'...You need to up your game..
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..-Da R.I.P.-.. "..I'ma R.I.P.pa', remember.."  --Darkness Shines Bright-- |-([..Let The Records Show..])-| Body Count: 91 Kills Survivors: 16 Injured Still Lost In Battle: 70 Knock Outs In My Scope: -- |
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11-05-04, 08:36 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
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lyric and gigantic rhyme!!!  |
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11-05-04, 08:54 PM
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Flyweight
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nah...they dont...the only similarity is the "ic" at the end..
Thats one of your problems...not JUST the last portion or peice of a word should rhyme with another, but the other word should rhyme with the WORD..not the ending...
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..-Da R.I.P.-.. "..I'ma R.I.P.pa', remember.." --Darkness Shines Bright-- |-([..Let The Records Show..])-| Body Count: 91 Kills Survivors: 16 Injured Still Lost In Battle: 70 Knock Outs In My Scope: -- |
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11-05-04, 08:58 PM
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IP:
For SHizzle Niggas Imma Keep It Long Beach
One(One)
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Knock Out Stroke
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11-05-04, 09:02 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP:
ay yo im here.. whoeva pmed me you guys wanted to ask me sumfink?
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11-05-04, 09:02 PM
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#15
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
kooboo=in
epic you want in wigga? |
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