![]() |
|
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio ![]() |
|
![]() |
![]() |
||
The Watcher
|
IP:
Picture:
Ya verse wasnt bad...the first bar was stretched, but the rest of the lines were straight...there was a decent flow to it...punches actually connected well...but the only thing is, ya punches were played out...shit like "u've got two dads" and "tossed salad" are played yo...but i still liked ya last line tho, i've never seen it flipped like that... Plutonium: Not bad, but definitely not ya best....structure was coo so there was a good flow....opener was good, but the 'picture' & 'art' shit was startin to git old quick...but punchwise, u still managed to connect....overall, u had a lil more creativity cuz of concepts that were more fresh... V/ Plutonium, but not by much... |
||
![]() |
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|