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12-22-04, 02:34 PM
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...Simply The Best
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cus they didn't want any wack people in on their collab....lol...j/k
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12-22-04, 02:37 PM
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anxiety--- we already had this going before you were in the crew, wicked clown added his part yesterday and i added ur name in my verse..... if u want a verse just type one up and post it in the cerw thread.....
 and red bull will edit it like he did for wicked clown
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12-22-04, 02:41 PM
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^ Most definetly will...
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12-22-04, 02:44 PM
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come on some proper feedback wud be appreciated.....verse for verse stuff
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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12-22-04, 06:43 PM
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werd...this shit is fuckin dope. im uppin this shit, dont sleep on this, honest feed please
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12-22-04, 09:39 PM
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aight...anxiety....ya verse has been added....uppin this shit ...don't sleep yall
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12-22-04, 09:48 PM
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The Rulers Back
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nice shit peoples now The Committee needs to put one out.:thumbup........
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12-23-04, 01:15 AM
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word...uppin for feedback
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12-23-04, 03:42 AM
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Upping.........
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12-23-04, 08:54 PM
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red bull
good verse u managed to name a lot of people and rhyme them along with keeping the flow intact a very good opener... I.Mind good kept shit goin and a good follow up to the introduction, nice vocab and i liked the multies Premanition this had the best vocab out of all parts in my opinion combined with multies excellent part... kwell wasnt feelin this as much as the first 3 but it still brought ya crew love and got the point through ill-grammatix it felt kind of the same as kwells sayin topicals,poetry etc. but it had a higher vocab and better multies ill.logic this was ok in my opinion nothing too good but the same as kwells got the point across and u still reppin ya crew to the fullest chaos eh...the metaphores seemed kind of weak along with the last bar but its ok none the less phatmic in my opinion had the best punchlines of all parts, they were raw and i just thought they were dope good flow and vocab too lady fiya this was good too had the most depth imo and nice wordplay... wickedclown this was my least liked part in the OM in my opinion no hate but i wasnt feelin it, the punches were weak and felt elementary and there was no vocab to back it up but still keep doin ya thang anxiety best flow of the OM, held that aspect down definately and i liked all the lines and last bar was a great bar to end the whole piece overall it was great i enjoyed most of the parts and MAB's got their people in all categories and aspects good shit peace
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12-25-04, 02:47 PM
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Only the Illist
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ummmm... mine had no vocab? ummm read it again it was full of vocab... uhhhh sorry u feel that way.... uppin tho |
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12-23-04, 09:28 PM
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Red Bull's rhyme scheme is terrible..
Dynasty and emcee dont rhyme. Skriptz and grammatix dont rhyme. Resurection and perfection dont rhyme. Syllable count son.. rhyming words have to have the same number of syllables.. Thats all i felt like reading.. ..But dont inflate your egos to much now, kids.. |
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12-25-04, 01:50 PM
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shut up bitch, sick of ur bull shit, ur ego is bigger than anyones n u never even battle just talk shit..... thats all uppin
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12-25-04, 03:35 PM
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I know dawg!! damn, all those words rhyme!!
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12-27-04, 07:56 AM
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Back In Business
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grammatix don't rhyme?!!!...you gotta be shittin' me!!!! ... you might wanna read it again homie...matter fact I'll do ya one better and spell it out for ya..since it's obvious you have no idea what a "rhyme" is... you see my crew comes through with the illest of all tactics putting M.ind A.bove B.ody; "Ill-Logic" and "Ill-Grammatix" no practice is neccessary we "Flow" with "Intelligence" provided evidence; defeated two crews when they let us in so get ya veterans; combine ya crews; continue scheamin' and plannin' in the end we'll still be standing strong laughing while feedin the canon' with punches; heat-seeking and landing... there ain't no comparison so stop saying y'all dope as hell then get smoked... it's embarrassin' from poetry ... text to topicals .... audios .... tournaments it's like we found the spirit of christmas and y'all hanging like ornaments either you got me confused with someone in ya crew or ya was high or some shyt when ya read this...omma give you the benefit of the doubt...if it was neither of the two.... you can go fuck yaself.... real hard.... Amidou Diallo style! werd Last edited by Ill-Grammatix : 12-27-04 at 08:02 AM. |
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