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Old 12-27-04, 07:03 PM   #1
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Red Bull's rhyme scheme is terrible..

Dynasty and emcee dont rhyme.
Skriptz and grammatix dont rhyme.
Resurection and perfection dont rhyme.

Syllable count son.. rhyming words have to have the same number of syllables..

Thats all i felt like reading..

..But dont inflate your egos to much now, kids..



Wow..u must be smoking...or u cant pronounce words write

all talk...
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Old 12-24-04, 03:03 PM   #2
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Old 12-25-04, 03:32 PM   #3
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ummmm... mine had no vocab? ummm read it again it was full of vocab... uhhhh sorry u feel that way.... uppin tho



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expose the mentality, makin people see MABs reality
murderin bitch made crews like Mortal Kombat fatalitys
^it was weak and mentality,reality,fatality is common...wen i say no vocab i mean like words that i dont see a lot

dropin rhymes dramaticly, increasin peeps losses fanaticly
shootin lyrical bullets imphaticly, bring RV to its knees
i liked imphaticaly and fanaticaly but these were the only non common words in the whole verse...the other people in the collab had more non common words

otha Emcees beggin us please, runnin, hidin in the trees
niggas must be retarded commin at Mind Above Body
no vocab

with bullshit loddy doddy, get blown away with a lyrical shotty
and sentanced to life like they name was john gotti
no vocab

leavin our mark forever on this game, we found the fame
so fuck what you heard and always remember our name...
no vocab

so there was only 2 words that i thought were unique vocab im not startin beef jus tellin it how i see it

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Old 12-25-04, 11:28 PM   #4
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Old 12-26-04, 12:18 AM   #5
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Old 12-27-04, 03:41 PM   #6
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Damn nice essay. one word for this callab is DOPE. But work on struture fam's
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Old 12-27-04, 06:58 PM   #7
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word....and for Mimesis your a fag...no point in calling you out, cause i don't feel like joining another site just to battle you...i am sure some herbs would be down though so you could get some more easy wins...stay the fuck out of our shit...M.A.B. is dope...nuff said....

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Old 12-27-04, 07:15 PM   #8
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Can anyone put an feedback in my freestyle open mic (#5). fav'z will be returned.
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Old 12-28-04, 03:22 PM   #9
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Old 01-04-05, 02:56 PM   #10
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last uppin for this.....end of mab
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Old 01-04-05, 11:06 PM   #11
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wicked cloan lady fiyah phat mic and il logic was the only worth reading the rest was garbage no hate any ways u guys keep elevatin 6/10
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Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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