a new joint.......


put in some work on this joint....... let me get some feed...... tryed to improve on what yall been saying.... emotion and delievery.....riding the beat and all that.....

let me know something.....

joints called Recognize Game.....

first joint on the top


links in the siggy

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

Listening.. LOL.. damn A.I is killin niggas man... ... i was feelin this alot.. were you clipping the entire time.. sounds like u did, but ur effectrs masked it.. iunno.. but this was hot .. you get off sometimes, but thats just the way your flow does.. its original.. hotshit man.... god damn lol.. hot hot hot.. that crack, put in ya nose and sniff it .. na mean ?

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

Nice, flows off sometimes... But besides that lyrics were nice... everything else was good to. Nice drop.

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do your research.

aiight beats ok not great though....vocals sound overdriven plus the vocals r a tiny bit too low in the mix...lyrics r actually pretty good some thought put into them...good flow ok delivery and voice...not feeling the overdriven vocal effect man...but its aiight...nice drop..extra bonus points on your use of alliterations that was good...keep writting use more descritive adjectives when writting also use a thesaurus man(make ya ish more complex)...

to the top.........

appreciate the feed for real

"ez"

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

quality was not good lol, vocals were bad is seemed, lyrics were nothin special but they were good. beat was below average, i wasnt feeln it. flow was good for the beat doe. overall 6/10 good looks

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

yo your flow reminds me of Rza style

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www.soundclick.com/lethalgk

good shit stop mixing you damn tracks!!!you dont know how to do it send me your damn vokals and ill do it.

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LOL...ayo...cats is hilarious...i was the 1st one to call you on ur flow being off beat...niggas said I was hatin...shit aint hate dawg...Imma fan of hip hop...i love it...and we all here to help each other, even if I don't like ur dumb ass...

I just find it funny that niggas don't think shit stinks until they land face flat in it...


ne way...beat is okay...a tad monotonous...ur flow is okay...on beat....but u don't own the beat...it's like u don't write to the beat, which u shud...each beat deserves to be written to...nah mean...don't cheat it


delivery is okay

lyrics...okay


nothing special here...


and I'm still better than you.PERIOD.






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blah.......... to the top

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

A little tip for your quality......you don't always have to match the volume of your vocals to the beat....you can match the volume of the beat to your vocals. Try lowering the instrumental next time......maybe even lower them both. The lower the volume output, the less chance of clipping

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