aiight beats ok not great though....vocals sound overdriven plus the vocals r a tiny bit too low in the mix...lyrics r actually pretty good some thought put into them...good flow ok delivery and voice...not feeling the overdriven vocal effect man...but its aiight...nice drop..extra bonus points on your use of alliterations that was good...keep writting use more descritive adjectives when writting also use a thesaurus man(make ya ish more complex)...