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Old 01-16-05, 05:07 AM   #4
.Ike.
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eehhhh i wasnt really feelin this drop that much......

first off if your gonna write something....write something with meaning....not gang shit and gangsta shit....none of that is cool.....i kinda find it hard to believe that u run with bloods killin peeps n shit when u on the internet rappin......but anyways...flow was decent...you had a couple multis but not that many...you could have came harder with the multis.....there wasnt a whole lotta wordplay or nothin there....no vocab at all...up your vocab.....structure was decent.......too gangsta in my opinion....wasnt really feelin this piece.....i give it a 3/10
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