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Old 01-16-05, 01:05 AM   #1
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Last Year In 2004! - A Review

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aiight this is long also....


i dont know about u, but to me, last year was truly live
and i can't wait to see what happens in the year 2k5
we can start at the super bowl, you all know what happened
no one remembers the game, only the tit of janet jackson
an lets not forget, that midget jermaine stays fuckin her
cali cats got the terminator for their state governor
ben an j-lo broke up, so did brad an jen, too bad for them
jay fuckin b, nas fuckin kelis, beef goes on, when will it end
bush, 4 more years, who voted for the american psycho
she bangs, she bangs, will hung, now that's MY american idol
for attempted murder, the state team tries to take Beans
jacko raped teens, for real, the olsen twins turned 18
but mary kate, she, wouldn't eat, thats my main squeeze
ash lip synced, that shit stinks, its still a jess an lachey thing
they found saddam, but still lookin hard for that osama fella
mobb deep split up cuz of alchemist? now that's a shocker, fellas
50 stayed poppin shit, makin money off this beef music
leadin to him saying if it wasnt for him there wouldnt be a g-unit
she's accusin, im talkin bout t-boz sayin she got smacked then by mack 10
peedi crakk came out of the joint, freekey zeekey went back in
then there was the flip vs t.i., who's about knee high
smashin flip on collect from jail, sayin he done disturbed the bee hive
m.o.p. forever reppin...danze an fame, hard OGs
i'm tellin you, last year, there was plenty beef
the jigga man "retired", but kept on comin back like number 23
r.i.p. to odb, now a spot in the wu set's vacant
k-mart said fuck the nets an jason, dmx tried to play a fed agent
it dont get any less amazin, i do the research u lazy fucks
how in the fight club, remy martin done ate up lady luck
then she an joe brought u "lean back", fab came with "breathe"
nas dropped "thief's theme", now we waitin for the game's release
2004 was a year of beef, music, and elevations
Now you gotta wait a while for 2k5's revelations


just a keystyle structure fucked but oh well

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Old 01-16-05, 01:27 AM   #2
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niice shit rite here man i was feelin it maybe you should do a year 2004 in rv that be dope ya know.anyways 8.8/10 nice read here...........
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Old 01-16-05, 01:33 AM   #3
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yea im doing that one too but im exhausted lol too much writing for one night
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Old 01-16-05, 01:48 AM   #4
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Flow... No i didnt read this shit... And no i wont read this shit faggot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But i will tomorrow cause im just not in the mindset (AKA im fucking drunk son) so i will hit this up tomorrow...


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Old 01-16-05, 04:12 AM   #5
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this was a good piece......very original....i liked the whole concept.......flow was good, vocab was good, everything was good. I liked the whole idea of this.....and every line was good from beginning to end.....shit was dope....i give it a 9/10
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Old 01-16-05, 02:03 PM   #6
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thx for feedback upping for more
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Old 01-16-05, 02:40 PM   #7
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nice peace very nice piece your flow stayed on point the whole time your structure was nice makkin it easier to read very creative i really look forward to reading your stuff good one man 9/10
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