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01-13-05, 09:58 PM | #1 | |||||
A Reflection Of The Past
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C.A.L.I VS George k. Stanza
IP: 88C4 C811
Check Ins Must Be In By Friday Or Your Topic Wont Be Given...
If Check Ins Are In Then You Will Be Given A topic To Write About... Poems Then Must Be In By Sunday And Voting Will Be Over On Tuesday... Topic:in a unknown area
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01-13-05, 10:16 PM | #2 | |||
Flyweight
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IP: F4F0 BA13
i guess you didn't see that i wanted to be signed out of this
but meh, lol...guess i will stay after all anyways check... much luck Empire |
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01-14-05, 12:02 AM | #3 | |||||||
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
^good luck your one of the few people i rv i like and respect good luck george
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01-15-05, 12:46 AM | #4 | |||||||
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
Cold metal air thick with urines stench
Hunger twists my body as spasms force my stomach to wrench Darkness in this room in the distance lights blaze low Outlines of objects cast menacing shadows in thier lazy glow Silience has a soft humming sound and i hear it now All around Like the buzzing of bees i hear the thud of my heart beat as i calm down I stand on cold stone my bones froze as the cold wind whips through my battered clothes I reach out but my extension is short only handfulls of air return Then in one turn realazation hits and my eyes burn as tears flow like small fountains down my faces path And hell baptizies me in fire as i fail to realize where my placements at I see the window open cold breezes pushing through the screens holes Nightmares hit me like dark demons yet my scream holds I push hard on the bars which movement ceases from Foolish teachers who are trained in our enviroments to teach us dumb Now im too stupid......................... NO im too ignorant to know that im trapped My hourglass cracked................... as i cut my hands on shattered fragements trying to push the sand back Cuz im lost in a unknown area and no one knows where im at
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01-16-05, 10:52 PM | #5 | |||
Flyweight
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IP: F4F0 BA13
Nothing's innocent it's the incentive in,
sin and it's been a friend pent within a pen left, the venom injected reflections dissect sentiment wrenched with intent from my head on a quest to collect the intimate... impressions hid repressed amidst the caustic locked away in a closet where even God’s grip fought to pick the safe a Bic the makeshift Faust fixed a faucet upon my brain evicting the strain as thoughts drip.... fuck im sorry mayne... this was all i got done, i was busy as hell this weekend and on top of that i felt like shit today. So as you may have guessed writing wasn't a top priority. Again i apologize i hadn't intended for this to happen and i wanted to post at least what i had done so you wouldnt feel like you wasted a verse. I know it's not 20 so you can dq meh if ya want but i just didnt want you to think i was ducking or gonna no show |
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01-17-05, 03:24 PM | #6 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
AII This was Very Very Very close But Im Sorry I Gotta Give My Vote To CALI .....Because He Poem really Stood out And Made Me really Feel it if you know what I Mean ........GKS Poem was good to But I Did See some Minor Errors and stuff but trust me When I Say ThiS battle is gonna make Battle of the week in the magz LOL But I Had To Give my vote to CALI bcuz It seems That He Really Put He best Foot Foward .....
v/ CALI |
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01-17-05, 08:57 PM | #7 | |||
Flyweight
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IP: F4F0 BA13
there was no errors mayne
my structure was flawless but you didnt really have to explain your vote mine wasn't even 20 lines cali should get this without a doubt |
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01-17-05, 08:58 PM | #8 | |||||||
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
^well See I Really Wish Youd Stay In The League Bro
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01-18-05, 01:07 AM | #9 | |||||||
Ask About Me
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IP: F573 D940
if i need to explain my vote i will
vote=cali....
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