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01-21-05, 04:46 PM | #1 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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Flow Intelligent Vs. Drama Queen (Heavyweight Championship Match)
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Battles Go Up Friday Check In Due Sunday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Verses Due Tuesday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Voting Ends Thursday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time 20 Lines Minimum 40 Lines Maximum No Biting No Recycling Do Not Go Over The Line Limit Or Under The Line Limit Meaning No Less Than 20 Lines No More Than 40 Lines You Must Vote On 3 Battles Per Week And Edit Them Into Your Check-In.. If You Dont Do So, Youre Banned From The Tourney The Following Week Topic: Framed Convict
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01-21-05, 09:07 PM | #2 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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good luck drama queen should be a pretty good battle
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01-22-05, 06:50 AM | #3 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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Yup, g'luck...I think I could learn from this battle, am sure it'll be good
DQ
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01-26-05, 01:44 PM | #4 | |||
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vote: DQ
for showing up, verse was good. a quickie but had mad potential. i enjoyed your structure. things flowed nicely. beautiful piece. good luck with the leauge. Last edited by eph : 01-27-05 at 12:43 AM. |
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01-26-05, 03:19 PM | #5 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 4EA4 53F1
Obligation 9/11 still remains fresh in my memory,those innocent souls deceased
World terrified,shocked by images,mourning from the west to the east But was no relief to the aching inside my heart,building the grudge Created hatred towards Arabs,although I know it's wrong to prejudge And yet I blame every single one of them for the death of my father Even tried to understand the ground for their actions but why bother? Stay a constant threat to our beloved nation and which it stands for Country we adore,God Bless America,no wonder Bush is talkin bout war Men being begged to join the US army but I don't feel no hesiation Obey orders because it's my obligation towards our next generation The turbulent battle has started,time to combat this organized crime Revenge but also last tribute to those who couldn't continue to climb Guilt Months have passed of crawling,killing and suffering on the front Thousands of soldiers risking their lives for Bush's treasure hunt I came here to defeat criminal minds,not to kill an innocent child People screaming for mercy due to the lies of a man on who I relied Thought we were tryin to dismantle a siuation which started to boil Searchin for justice when in reality we were just searchin for oil Shake my head in disbelief questioning how I could've been so naive As I perceive consequences,I even consider an absence without leave The shattered houses,broken dreams,the hell which I helped to build Looking into the eyes of orphans,heart torn apart by immense guilt Running from grenades thrown by those sent on this ruthless crusade No selective battling,every Iraqi soul convicted,no exception made DQ
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01-26-05, 03:34 PM | #6 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173217
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173214 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173219 I believe that everyone's view on the world has changed somehow after 9/11. Maybe you became more distrusting towards Arabic people or prejudge sooner than you did before. This is what my verse is all aboutin fact because your prejudices create a framed conviction towards those people.
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01-27-05, 10:26 AM | #7 | ||||
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Flows busy with school so hes gonna be signed out for a while...
Drama Queen wins by noshow. Drama Queen +3 Flow Intellegent -4
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